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Optimistic Orange

CELESTE A bevy of wavelets rushes to the shore while on peach coastline, this quietude I feel, Under the alloy of rocks not seen before A hidden water-world encrypts its frothed zeal. The dolphin in tungsten leaps, and then again With a belly raised to a marmalade sky; And another whirl...free like a rust-toned crane Breaths in awe, an enchantment is my reply. To be fed by April’s torches, amber- lit when lazy boats sail on coral of Celeste… and coiled tides gather a fragrant melon quilt exulting my Sunday’s pause… my hours’ fine rest. Silent One's united Colors, Orange Optimistic orange--uplifting, rejuvenating 3/4/2016 11 syls per line

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Date: 3/14/2016 11:49:00 PM
Nette, Congratulations on your orange theme win. always ~LINDA~
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Date: 3/8/2016 12:35:00 AM
What a beautiful tone and mood your words have woven. Congrats on your win. I have to Fav this. Hugs, SuZ
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Date: 3/7/2016 3:04:00 PM
Congrats on your winng work..Good to see your creative work in the orange line-up..Sara
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Date: 3/7/2016 2:08:00 PM
Dear Nette Congratulations on the contest win, a wonderful entry, love the imagery totally awesome piece, great job, and thanks for your visit on my skylark glad you enjoyed it so much, take care and have a wonderful night, cheri
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Date: 3/6/2016 7:32:00 PM
Hi Nette, Congratulations on your placement in the contest. A beautiful write that spreads such peaceful visions within the mind....Vlad.
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Date: 3/6/2016 5:20:00 PM
Congratulations Nette on your fine win.
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Date: 3/6/2016 10:16:00 AM
There are a lot of beautiful images in your work. An alloy of rocks....is making me think about this planet differently. It's all part of a great big whole. You are wonderful.
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Date: 3/6/2016 10:15:00 AM
Nette, "April’s torches, amber- lit"...so lovely...congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo *smiles*
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Date: 3/6/2016 9:09:00 AM
- Nette, congratulations on your win in contest: ORANGE - hugs // Anne-Lise:)
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Date: 3/6/2016 12:58:00 AM
Vibrant! I envy your talent---a masterpiece!
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Date: 3/5/2016 3:58:00 PM
OMG Nette, I predict this will come in at the top my friend! It is original, beautiful and enchanting! I am faving it! #7++
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Date: 3/4/2016 2:55:00 PM
- Nette,so beautiful ! - Good luck in contest   - Best wishes for a lovely weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/4/2016 9:56:00 AM
Love how you ended this piece, dear...Serene and beautiful. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 3/4/2016 6:38:00 AM
beautiful quatrain Nette good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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