Optimistic Orange

CELESTE A bevy of wavelets rushes to the shore while on peach coastline, this quietude I feel, Under the alloy of rocks not seen before A hidden water-world encrypts its frothed zeal. The dolphin in tungsten leaps, and then again With a belly raised to a marmalade sky; And another whirl...free like a rust-toned crane Breaths in awe, an enchantment is my reply. To be fed by April’s torches, amber- lit when lazy boats sail on coral of Celeste… and coiled tides gather a fragrant melon quilt exulting my Sunday’s pause… my hours’ fine rest. Silent One's united Colors, Orange Optimistic orange--uplifting, rejuvenating 3/4/2016 11 syls per line
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March 14, 2016 at 11:49 PM
Nette, Congratulations on your orange theme win. always ~LINDA~
Delaney Avatar
March 8, 2016 at 12:35 AM
What a beautiful tone and mood your words have woven. Congrats on your win. I have to Fav this. Hugs, SuZ
Kendrick Avatar
March 7, 2016 at 3:04 PM
Congrats on your winng work..Good to see your creative work in the orange line-up..Sara
Dunn Avatar
March 7, 2016 at 2:08 PM
Dear Nette Congratulations on the contest win, a wonderful entry, love the imagery totally awesome piece, great job, and thanks for your visit on my skylark glad you enjoyed it so much, take care and have a wonderful night, cheri
Raven Avatar
March 6, 2016 at 7:32 PM
Hi Nette, Congratulations on your placement in the contest. A beautiful write that spreads such peaceful visions within the mind....Vlad.
Negron Flores Avatar
March 6, 2016 at 5:20 PM
Congratulations Nette on your fine win.
Beaufort Avatar
March 6, 2016 at 10:16 AM
There are a lot of beautiful images in your work. An alloy of rocks....is making me think about this planet differently. It's all part of a great big whole. You are wonderful.
Scars Avatar
March 6, 2016 at 10:15 AM
Nette, "April’s torches, amber- lit"...so lovely...congrats on your placement in the contest :)-luloo *smiles*
Andresen Avatar
March 6, 2016 at 9:09 AM
- Nette, congratulations on your win in contest: ORANGE - hugs // Anne-Lise:)
Marty Avatar
March 6, 2016 at 12:58 AM
Vibrant! I envy your talent---a masterpiece!
Marcum Wong Avatar
March 5, 2016 at 3:58 PM
OMG Nette, I predict this will come in at the top my friend! It is original, beautiful and enchanting! I am faving it! #7++
Andresen Avatar
March 4, 2016 at 2:55 PM
- Nette,so beautiful ! - Good luck in contest   - Best wishes for a lovely weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Manassian Avatar
March 4, 2016 at 9:56 AM
Love how you ended this piece, dear...Serene and beautiful. Good luck in the contest.
Allison Avatar
March 4, 2016 at 6:38 AM
beautiful quatrain Nette good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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