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Oppressive Orange

Oppressive Orange Another tequila sunrise drifting up from this deserts overheated floor. Barely daybreak, tangor skies just becoming visible but the sweat already stings like citrus... How can this place be called home?... This place by noon will be an inferno, no shade, no refuge, just chromatic mirages filled in by reddish sand and sunrays that burn your pigment on first touch... How can this place be called home?... Nothing grows here, no wheat, no rice, no orange groves, or mangoes. Nothing except the population of the starving and this is where they call home, in the fluorescent flame of Hell. How can this place be called home?... The burnt reddish pigment dominates life here holding everything down by the weight of its heat. Here it is the beauty and the curse, can it get any worse? How can this place be called home?... The only place on earth oppressed by a color and all of its bad attributes! The color of heat, the color of life, the color of death for millions of starving people... How can this place be called home?

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Date: 3/21/2016 6:04:00 PM
I think this is excellent Brian and I would have rated this much higher! I checked the orange contest list and your poem was not on it. I am assuming you were given an N/A like I was on my poem entered in this second chance contest. The emotion alone I felt while reading your poem merits a number. I am so happy your poem got a second chance to be seen and appreciated by someone like me. Bravo my friend! #7 ; )
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Brian Davey
Date: 3/21/2016 9:06:00 PM
Thank you so much Connie it is a very serious piece about an often ignored epidemic in our world today. It touches my heart seeing how it affects you, a true world spirit. Thanks again
Date: 3/21/2016 3:38:00 PM
Hi Brian, Congratulations on your placement in the contest....Vlad.
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Brian Davey
Date: 3/21/2016 9:02:00 PM
Thank you so much Vlad
Date: 3/4/2016 9:03:00 PM
Hey Brian, Dang--that's a good poem. Good luck with the contest. I like your chances. Cheers, Brian
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Brian Davey
Date: 3/5/2016 11:50:00 PM
Thank you very much for the vote of confidence Brian. Can always count on a fellow Irishman to bring me cheer

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