Opposites and Differences

Man who loves red
Woman who loves pale pink instead
Man who sports a truck...the bigger the better
Nice plush car with velvety seats
Home with plush carpet for soft feet (kept very clean)
God as he films this must think what a funny scene
For two very opposites arguing over how to spend money
When the problem is they have nothing at all in common
What makes him happy makes her feel very alone
What makes her happy make him feel out of control..

Well do they make it?  Only God knows..
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Falotico Avatar
June 26, 2010 at 3:30 AM
this is so true, they will make it... love the words and "God as he films" always Michael
Chachere Avatar
June 24, 2010 at 6:19 PM
you know, i find it hilarious when the quote "opposites attract" lol.haha! yeah but thats only with magnets, not humans.((: ~Always
Semeniuk Avatar
June 24, 2010 at 5:50 PM
"god as he films this must think what a funny scene"...what a great line and a wonderful picture!
Culverhouse Avatar
June 24, 2010 at 4:55 PM
funny one mom...so true yet not so true. I like things to be clean but I don't like to clean, I like a truck but I like to be more comfortable than in a truck. etc.
Babcock Avatar
June 24, 2010 at 3:32 PM
I think opposites attract. This sounds like my relationship. We do not have much in common but we find common ground. I find that we take turns fighting for control over the relationship. You have to learn the give and take and at times I truly wonder how we survived 37 years of marriage. God Bless Phyl
Johnson Avatar
June 24, 2010 at 3:08 PM
They'll just have to stop making their own desires the top priority. Thanks for your comments on my poem. Daddy didn't have to fight the boll weevil in the North but he had to fight grasshoppers that took evrythijng. Love, Joyce
Austin Avatar
June 24, 2010 at 2:50 PM
Make it? Why not? Togetherness (both doing and liking the same things together) can be poison. I once asked an old, old couple, "How can a couple be always together, never apart for more than an hour or two?" The man said, "One is a collie dog." Good brain twister, Sara. Love, daver
Dietrich Avatar
June 24, 2010 at 2:20 PM
Very astute observation, Sara! They can make it, but they will probably never really be truly happy. Thanks for commenting to my blog. I enjoyed seeing your answer. Luv, Andrea
Goff Avatar
June 24, 2010 at 2:20 PM
not my area of expertise...now...ask me about boomerangs! that's a horse of a different color!!!! jimbo
Bruinekool Avatar
June 24, 2010 at 1:38 PM
There needs to be chemistry and common interests, yet still enough conflit to keep things interesting. Good write, Al
Del Fierro Avatar
June 24, 2010 at 1:07 PM
sometimes,the opposites attracting,can actually lead the two,too a unified force unimaginable....unfortunately,most can't do that,as the domineering spirit fights for control....peace,jay
Devonshire Avatar
June 24, 2010 at 12:58 PM
Well, they say opposites attract and I can relate to the scenario you described, Sara. Sometimes these relationships do work, but often they fail. Best wishes, Carolyn
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