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Opposites

Always saying "I" and "me," egotists make poor company. Altruists have found the key, unlocking joy with "you" and "we." June 28, 2020 entered in the Strand Completely New Poem (3) Contest May 15, 2021 entered in the Surprise Me Poetry Contest Sponsor: Line Gauthier

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Jan Allison

Date: 5/20/2021 4:20:00 AM

Love it ! Many congratulations on your win Janice hugs Jan xx

Sam Kauffman

Date: 5/19/2021 11:28:00 AM

Janice, you have gone to the heart of a generous, compassionate, caring heart. Nice rhyme scheme! Congrats and high fives to you!

Curtis Johnson

Date: 5/18/2021 12:09:00 PM

Congrats, Janice. So much is said here about the way we are and the way we should be. Blessings.

Christuraj Alex

Date: 5/17/2021 11:40:00 PM

Congratulations!

Winged Warrior

Date: 7/2/2020 9:40:00 AM

Beautifully inked Janice...great execution of thought dear poetess...best wishes...^WW^ :o)

Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/1/2020 8:44:00 PM

Succinct ink there, Janice: Sage advice, if only Me, Myself, and I would heed it! LOL. Thanks, Gershon

Janice Canerdy
Date: 7/1/2020 10:22:00 PM

Thanks so much, Gershon. Janice

Rico Leffanta

Date: 6/30/2020 2:18:00 PM

The USA has Donald Trump contests where we count how many times he uses, "I" in a speech. A local politician, Mufi Hannemann, can not write a paragraph about ANY subject without using "I" at least a dozen times! Well caught and reported! Aloha! Rico

Janice Canerdy
Date: 6/30/2020 3:36:00 PM

Thank you, Rico. Janice