OPPOSITE SEX

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OPPOSITE SEX

      OPPOSITE  SEX

Every morning I wake and gaze my lover in her face
Her eyes are close so tight
I wonder who she is dreaming of
Maybe in her sleep is the only place she forgives me.

In a bit, she will awake
Walking towards the shower
Her fresh smile in the morning is fake
I can smell her odor,  like a flower.

How could I do this to you?
I know you are hurting everyday
With all the things I did to you
Thank you for not walking away.

Seeing as you get dressed in front of me
With a body so nice leaving me aroused
Afraid of you going your own way
Every time I see you leave with an open blouse

The harder I try to make it better
You gain authority  over me
Holding you near in the cold weather
You push me away when you remember

You are the best thing that ever happens to me 
How could I be so dumb with my stupidity

May be one day you will forgive 
Without you I realize I cannot live
My days go by me very slow
The love for me, you no longer show

Lying by your side where you rest
You turn away before I turn off the light
I want to touch you with a nice soft caress
You say you are tired just about every night
I kiss your neck to see if you respond 
You give me the cold shoulder as if we just had a fight
I touch your curves with my fingertips
Still, you do not give into my lips.

I beg you please do not make me wither away
You say you have nothing to say
Regretting what I did everyday

I am still deeply in love with you,
Without you I do not know what to do!!!

 =====Opposite Sex=====
                 

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Date: 12/10/2017 2:52:00 AM
Great flow of words,nice structural peice.
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Date: 9/11/2017 3:46:00 AM
i really like the words ,they feed my soul.hello friend .
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Date: 9/11/2017 3:45:00 AM
i really like the words ,they feed my soul.hello friend .
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Date: 7/18/2016 12:59:00 PM
Interesting how you look at this from the male's point of view, Skat. I can feel the yearning of one who appears to be getting paid by for his deeds. The fact that she did not just pack and leave allows space for hope....Warm regards // paul
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Date: 6/30/2016 10:32:00 AM
I really like this poem. It flows well and I can feel how you feel.
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Date: 5/26/2016 4:44:00 AM
I really like this. You can feel the emotions, both his and hers. Brandi
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Date: 3/23/2016 9:47:00 AM
Very nice rhymes and lines Skat. I love it.
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Date: 3/17/2016 8:02:00 PM
Awesome write Skat, you captured the turbulent feelings that ineligibly happen when trust is broken and communication is loss. Congrats on this heartfelt write and win. Hugs
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Date: 2/25/2016 8:07:00 AM
Huh! that was awesome writing....I couldn't help but read it over and over again.
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Date: 1/18/2016 9:33:00 PM
I felt every want and need.....On both sides..beautiful write!
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Date: 1/12/2016 1:44:00 PM
beautifully created!
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Date: 11/24/2015 7:55:00 AM
Very nice poem beautiful
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Date: 11/14/2015 11:33:00 PM
WHAT A WORK !
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Date: 11/2/2015 12:48:00 PM
Oh yes very passionate with tender ink SKAT, Love and affection from the Opposite Sex. Lovable write.
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Date: 9/8/2015 6:24:00 AM
I love the story you've told, it is very beautiful and heartfelt. Thanks for welcoming me and for your comment on "What do You See?"
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Date: 6/4/2015 5:56:00 AM
same Q what was it you did? Touching with a finger tip, the opposite sex will reply, nowonder what happened lately. Perfect!!!!
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Date: 3/19/2015 2:58:00 PM
SKAT Really heartfelt, a personal feeling shared well with others. I am curious though. Just what was it you did?
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Date: 1/31/2014 4:51:00 PM
SKAT What a beautifully written poem. Full of emotion and heart. You told a great story of love, betrayal, and sorrow. Nicely done Thanks for the congrats and comment on my Alphabet Love Poem.
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Date: 7/7/2013 12:29:00 AM
no!
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Date: 5/27/2011 1:23:00 PM
Inventive write, with which many will be able to identify. Regards, Robert.
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Date: 9/26/2010 9:30:00 PM
really good poem
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Date: 5/20/2010 12:17:00 PM
beautiful! thanks for stopping by my work always love a nice comment =) it's poetess like you that inspire my work. so keep reading it's all a dedication to all.
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Date: 5/17/2010 11:28:00 AM
Hi again Irma :) Super belated congrats on your win with this one! Really very nicely done :)
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Date: 5/12/2010 5:16:00 PM
beautiful!
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Date: 5/10/2010 3:06:00 PM
Ooooo girl. is that how you think we think?dream on. and keep guessing. mean while this was great!!! John Henry Loving III You deserve this win, bask in the glory. and Nat, you did a wonderful job judging.
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