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I May or May Not Be Opposed Contest  ~  December 19, 2023

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A white rose grew in her Summer garden. "Beautiful rose, I must beg your pardon. for I must clip you from your flower bed to enjoy your aroma in my home instead." In crystal vase the rose was fondly admired until its velvet petals withered and expired. Delicate white roses grew in Summer's heat with such a delightful fragrance, cloyingly sweet Their beauty was enhanced in morning sunlight and rivaled the perfumed scent of jasmine at night Adored by passersby, they bloomed until the end of Fall when a cold north wind bent their stems in a sudden squall

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Date: 12/20/2023 2:30:00 PM
Beautifully penned lin, i love the scent and like them in the garden but not as cut flowers, i do like jasmine too, a poem which appeals to the senses :-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 12/20/2023 9:17:00 AM
Such a wonderful poem about the beauty of roses.
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Date: 12/19/2023 8:29:00 PM
Inside or out they are beautiful flowers Lin. The scent they give off is really pleasing to the senses. Good luck in the contest. Tom
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Date: 12/20/2023 1:25:00 AM
Good morning and thank you, Tom. I love their velvety petals and sweet scent.
Date: 12/19/2023 9:53:00 AM
Nice poem on rose. One a rose growing indoor, other in beautiful outdoor. Bothe of them display beauty to the end.
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Date: 12/19/2023 10:40:00 AM
Thanks so much for reading me, Jay. Your comments are always encouraging.

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