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Opening Petals of Want

you touch me
and I fall away 
to nothing


breaking apart
into a thousand
petals of want 


I am as bewitched 
as the trail
that lies beneath
your hand


incantations
sing through my blood
and I am wrought,
with my need
to list into you


at just a touch 
I need to inhale 
but,


you breath life
into every molecule
to overflow my spirit
and in the essence 
of love 


I lay in want
of the masters
hand  


and to fall as petals
at his feet


~~~~

Entered in Catie Lindsay's Competition 
Fanning the Flames 

Gained 1st Place

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 10/30/2010 5:00:00 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 10/16/2010 2:00:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest..Sara
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Date: 10/11/2010 5:24:00 AM
excellent words here Jayne thank you once again for sharing [Duncan]
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Date: 10/10/2010 4:53:00 PM
Jayne, this is simply wonderful!! I can see how this would score high! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 10/10/2010 1:55:00 PM
Jayne, this is simply stunning. A joy to read this Sunday evening >> James :)
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Date: 10/9/2010 1:59:00 PM
beautiful, congrats on your well deserved win in the contest
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Date: 10/9/2010 7:33:00 AM
I didn't find your soup mail Jayne! Agape, Moses
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Date: 10/8/2010 9:47:00 PM
More wins to come Jayne... keep writing and entering contests ..win or lose the experience is exhilarating..luv... thankxxx for your encouraging comments on my recent contest entry..luv..
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Date: 10/8/2010 11:50:00 AM
Congratulations Jayne on your first place, way to go girl. Agape, Moses
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Date: 10/8/2010 9:43:00 AM
Congratulations Jayne on your win in Catie Lindsey's contest "Fanning The Embers". Love, Carol
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Date: 10/8/2010 7:19:00 AM
congrats on your well deserved win with this excellent write enjoyed thanks for all your kind comments and have a great weekend faleshia
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Date: 10/8/2010 5:02:00 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest, Jayne
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Date: 10/7/2010 9:01:00 PM
Wow Jayne. Many congratulations on this first position win.
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Date: 10/7/2010 8:43:00 PM
Congrats on your 1st place Jayne It's well deserved for this very sensual piece..Take care~Deb
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Date: 10/7/2010 7:29:00 PM
Super congrats Jayne on your wonderful win for first place in Catie's contest with this hot hot piece.. enjoy your sweet victory tonight with luv..
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Date: 10/7/2010 2:27:00 AM
You really bring this picture to life with your well chosen words and effective style. Good luck in the contest
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Date: 10/6/2010 6:41:00 PM
great write!! very beautiful!!
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Date: 10/6/2010 4:52:00 PM
Who is the master? Very enigamtic, pithy poem. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
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Date: 10/6/2010 12:39:00 PM
what vivid imagery, jayne.. so tactile! huggs, nette
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Date: 10/6/2010 9:24:00 AM
AS i AGREE WITH cATIE, it will be a worthy entry for the contest, Jayne
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