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Opening The opening line in my story Gave the reader a nudge To read the entire tale of prose To the end that would be golden The story shook with appreciation For all the joys they’d found together Two hearts, two souls, two lives Bound up into one beautiful thought The story whispered with imagination That instructed the reader to dream And to reach beyond their mere ideas To the hopes that fall from heaven’s grace The story was alive with inspiration To give back to the reader full yearning For more words and more pages of hope Discovered within the heart of the story The story reached into the life of the prose And hinted at miracles and sweet friendship Feelings of love that whisper sweetly To the intimacy that lives within a spirit The story opened with only one sentence Powerful enough to conjure up serenity But gave back to the world a pleasant narrative Built on soft adverbs and gentle adjectives The opening line of the tale was poignant Words that would lift the reader to attention Drive him on with its everlasting paragraphs Built on sentences dripping with honeyed serenity

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Date: 11/12/2019 7:17:00 PM
well obtained. A story for the watcher to impale in their mind, and to decide to watch either some or all of it, indeed a great write. Thanks for sharing Gina
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