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As you open yourself up for love, You realize that you are getting something else, But you try to make like it is what you are looking for, Cause you know how it feels to have your heart broke, And it seem like the longer you stay, The more you hate him, The more he lie, The more you really wish he would die, And as you realize what you are wishing for, You realize this not you, This is not who you use to be, And you then want to go back to your old self, But he want you to stay the same, He like what he done to you, He like the lies he told you, But he try to make you see, See that to him they are not lies, But you realize you open yourself to this, And you also can close yourself out.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/1/2010 7:46:00 PM
Welcome to poetry soup! The light is always on here. Check out some of my works if you have the time. I would like a fresh victim. I mean opinion. ;)
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Date: 7/26/2010 4:44:00 PM
Welcome to the soup. Cool Poem. Love is a powerful tool among us and depends how we use it. it can destroy but it is beautiful when we find someone to share the emotions.
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Date: 7/26/2010 4:59:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Stephine. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/24/2010 1:03:00 PM
yes welcome to the soup,, and yes it is a very deep poem,,,takes a lot of guts to be honest about someone you love,,Have yourself a fun day,...p.d.
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Date: 7/23/2010 5:33:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup Family... so enjoyed reading your very creative write tonight.. with luv..
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