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Opaque World

The suture on my broken heart is torn, beyond repair. Not even the veneer of your love or kindness can bind it now. Crimson crystal drops drip, as I labour to liberate my heart from this opaque world... where no one sees me. 10.27.2020 Excerpt from "Free my heart" For Greg Barden's "Liberum Divisa 2" contest

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Date: 11/28/2020 11:10:00 AM
This is such a melancholy and pensive write, Jo - so filled with vivid images of heartbreaking pain and grieving. Congratulations on your win. Sending you blessings of the season and healing!
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Date: 11/26/2020 8:24:00 PM
A very Happy Thanksgiving, Jo - and sincere congratulations on your win in the LIBERUM DIVISA 2 Poetry Contest ... thank you so much for entering, my friend - blessings to you and yours! :-)
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Date: 10/29/2020 5:02:00 PM
Very well described, Jo that poor broken heart.
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Date: 10/28/2020 4:12:00 AM
- Wonderful poem, Jo :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/27/2020 8:40:00 AM
Wow Jo this is great, I'm sure this is a winner!
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Date: 10/27/2020 6:43:00 AM
Powerful write, Jo--it speaks to all the broken hearts out there.
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Date: 10/27/2020 6:12:00 AM
Great imagery. A broken nose that wont heal. ~~
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