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Opaque Memories

Cloudy overcast gray sky Autumn canvas of blurred images ... non-reflective, unchanging colors melted to the mental frame Down feathers from my wet pillow tickle my brooding thoughts Sadness turns to gladness whenever I see apparitions appear on the cloth: half-painted, unfinished pictures of me and you Night visions of what it might have been like growing old together — two blossoms blooming each day anew Turning restlessly, I see the adjacent empty pillow; and the cloudy gray sky then continues to grow, more cloudier than before Those opaque memories get more blurry, I can’t focus right anymore Burning tears melting away all my pride, letting you leave was the biggest mistake of my life Darkened emotions ... overcast gray sky I wished I hadn’t turned my back on you when you were struggling not to say goodbye Opaque memories always keep the canvas from being dry

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 8/4/2017 12:14:00 AM
Nice and sad piece. You have a great voice heard and felt in your words. So emotional and gripping. Great great stuff!
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Date: 7/31/2017 2:14:00 PM
Oh Freddie. A poem full of expression , very well written. The reader can feel this . Take care :)
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Date: 7/31/2017 11:04:00 AM
Oh Freddie, this drips with sad regret, fine pen my friend xomo
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