Opal Spells

Her allure blooms in musty shops
Held on silver bands of celtic lores

A foretelling of ancient paths...

Of twilight-caught scarlet raindrops
Of visions gleaned through fateful doors

Of spells whispered to Welsh hilltops

A mystic gem on Wiccan staff
My opal of demure witchcraft

5/15/19

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Date: 5/21/2019 2:35:00 PM
Quite beautiful; opal is my birthstone. Loved it!
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 5/21/2019 11:18:00 PM
My opal ring is my prize possession, thank you-
Date: 5/20/2019 12:24:00 PM
Not into Wiccan ways but love your poem! I can picture the staff. Nice!
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 5/21/2019 11:19:00 PM
Appreciate it, thanks, Kim.
Date: 5/19/2019 2:17:00 AM
Congratulations Michelle on your win - a clever ,sophisticated poem about an opal - I also have one that was my moms, they are beautiful stones. Hugs, Jennifer.
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 5/19/2019 7:02:00 PM
I adore my opal ring, thanks for your thoughtful comment, Jennifer!
Date: 5/16/2019 10:58:00 PM
the opal does have a certain mystique. This is an enchanting poem! Congratulations :)
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 5/18/2019 4:04:00 PM
Very glad for your sweet comment, P.S!
Date: 5/16/2019 9:40:00 PM
Somehow, I missed reading this one...Congrats to you, Michelle, for your trophy win in Line's contest! Best wishes, Gershon
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 5/18/2019 4:03:00 PM
Thank you, my friend!
Date: 5/16/2019 4:34:00 PM
oooooeee! My Welsh daughter, Rhiannon, also noticed your opal_spells_1144477 reference number, so perhaps someone should toe the Line? Aloha! Rico
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 5/18/2019 4:02:00 PM
Thank your lovely daughter for me, Rico (I have never been to Wales, though I would like to go one day)
Date: 5/16/2019 9:57:00 AM
wow Michelle I will look at my opal rings in a different light you cast an air of the occult over this gemstone with your poem!:-) hugs Jan xx
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 5/16/2019 11:32:00 AM
Much appreciate your kind comment, thanks, Jan-
Date: 5/15/2019 11:32:00 PM
This is such a favorite for me especially this part: "A mystic gem on Wiccan staff My opal of demure witchcraft...." Poor Line having to judge this one!
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 5/16/2019 11:31:00 AM
Thanks, Caren (it was the Wiccan line in your poem that got me on that track -)
Date: 5/15/2019 5:35:00 PM
OMG...I don't know how Line will be able to judge this contest. Every entry I read seems better than the next. I simply loved this Michelle! It gave me chills. I hope it is a top winner! ; ) xxoo
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 5/15/2019 11:18:00 PM
Thank you for such a 'bewitching' comment, Connie!
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