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Ooshka

ooshka is Scottish Gaelic for 'water' OOSHKA Edge of warm, edge of stillness edge of shaking sands fields of blue, touching you moving on, moving on. Floating mass in sea of Ooshka see the glass, it's breathing cold it's silky light in rainbow colours going on, going on. Million shores with foaming silver sleeping, walking, through the stars dreaming image of Azura rivers holding on, holding on. See the sea birds disappear but their watching from the shore Ooshka melting waves of sweetness looking on, looking on. Snow white waves on smoky pillows taking back the all it gave floating dreams forever fading then it's gone, then it's gone. Ooshka melting waves of sweetness, then its gone, then its gone.

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Date: 11/25/2023 5:35:00 AM
Where are rest of your poems. we remember when God sets us free from all sin again and again God has made us free He always loved you and me with Him we agree free from all anguish God helps us with what we wish does fill up our dish we were an outcast from what was a sinful past God freed us at last God made me clever helped me in my endeavor write best poem ever
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Date: 11/25/2023 5:34:00 AM
Where are rest of your poems. we remember when God sets us free from all sin again and again God has made us free He always loved you and me with Him we agree free from all anguish God helps us with what we wish does fill up our dish we were an outcast from what was a sinful past God freed us at last God made me clever helped me in my endeavor write best poem ever
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Date: 11/9/2023 12:33:00 PM
Score one for water ! I love this smooth and enticing form, fluid and refreshing. Ooshka surrounding. Brain-bathing delight.
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Jackie Elston
Date: 11/10/2023 5:53:00 AM
Thank you for kind comments. Water really fascinates me, l can stare at it for hours. Colours reflected in it, one day l'll paint what l see, if l could only slow down long enough. have a great day. J.
Date: 7/30/2023 3:18:00 AM
The same yet different, to touch yet not to hold. Aptly described. Good choice of words. Hope you are still about and have more poetry up your sleeve. Regards David in NZ now 4 years cancer free.
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Jackie Elston
Date: 11/10/2023 5:49:00 AM
Hi David, thank you comments. sorry not replied before now, lv been so busy and need to slow down.Really miss poetry soup, hopefully back again. J.

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