Oops And Downs

The man in the elevator, alas! 
Struck a small talk with a lady of class. 
Was dealt a bad card, 
Was sucker-punched hard - 
Dared to ask if she will go down, badass!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Dietrich Avatar
December 9, 2025 at 4:17 PM
Big congrats, Margarita
Goldsmith Avatar
December 1, 2025 at 11:36 AM
Congratulations on your win. Your "Oops And Downs" is a fun Limerick read. Have a fun day with your win..............
Messina Avatar
December 1, 2025 at 10:05 AM
OMG, Margarita...I read this a few times. So funny (lol). Congratulations on your winning placement in my contest! Charlie
Jones Avatar
November 2, 2025 at 9:41 PM
Love your limerick! Best wishes! Good night
Lillico  Avatar
November 2, 2025 at 10:20 PM
Thanks Karen!
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