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A pyromaniac named Jack, Who hailed from the town of Hackensack, Decided one day, with matches he’d play He’s a mummy now, flat on his back!

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Date: 11/12/2018 6:02:00 PM
what a clever limerick ML was it inspired by the British celebration of Bonfire Night on 5th November lol :-) hugs jan xx
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 11/17/2018 10:38:00 PM
I'm afraid not but, it was written around 3am so, there's no telling what I'll put down at that hour. Glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 11/7/2018 2:37:00 PM
Charred, medium-rare? "Jack Flat becomes Mummy" seems like a News of the World Headline. Congratulations on your success! Aloha! Rico
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 11/17/2018 10:38:00 PM
Thanks, Rico; I appreciate your visit.
Date: 11/6/2018 6:57:00 PM
Lol! I can just picture it, M.L. A fun and fantastic limerick. Great rhythm and rhyme. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 11/17/2018 10:39:00 PM
Thanks so much, Susan.
Date: 11/6/2018 2:49:00 PM
Good work. Creative one for sure. Thanks for the visits to my page. Sara
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 11/17/2018 10:39:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 11/6/2018 1:59:00 PM
You have added some favorite aspects of my life to this poem without realizing it. Wonderful limerick, my friend. Love the cadence of it, and the playfulness.
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 11/6/2018 2:06:00 PM
Thanks and I'm glad you enjoyed it.