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Dana'lynn Smith Contest Name Politically Educated | onward we go till comatose, to sift through truth n lies, brainwashing by the media shows, deceitful pollie, lies, corrupting no surprise, in multitude of guise, but karma of the putrid soul, waits to dim their eyes... thanks Laura B..... Don Johnson

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 1/22/2012 3:36:00 PM
Good stuff mate! A lot of truth in them words!
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Date: 1/21/2012 4:44:00 PM
loved that first line, Don. till comatose. It sure feels that way sometimes!! Good'un.
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Date: 1/20/2012 4:52:00 PM
Very nice Don. Nicely done,Greg
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Date: 1/20/2012 4:36:00 PM
Very impressive Don, enjoyed, Elizabeth
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Date: 1/20/2012 4:26:00 PM
to SIFT/ through TRUTH/ and LIES is 3 iambic feet - iambic trimeter!!! see I told YOU you were doing it and just didn't know it..you have 1 verse of 8/6/8/6 [4 lines in each]which is ballad format! Then you switch to 6/6/8/6..you could make it more regular by adding 2 syllables to line 5..Light and Love
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Date: 1/20/2012 4:10:00 PM
Wow Don, what a write this one is! You blew my mind with this one! This is such a great poem! Keep 'em coming...Awesome Work!!
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