Onset of Summer

when the coolness of spring 
begins to fade,
in the wake of rising heat
in early April in north Indian plains,
and the golden wheat crops
shimmer in glade,
flowers of different hues
begin to lose their bright sharp sheen.  

the dry, pale yellow and brown
dead leaves of most trees,
shed themselves off one by one
exposing the bare branches,
ahoy!! soon thereafter
the nature’s miracle can be witnessed,
if one looks at the bare dry branches
a bit more closely.

suddenly they seem to be covered 
with growing tender green leaf-shoots ‘n buds,
and slowly begin to swing
in the gentle breeze like coy maidens,
taking cover behind each other
they nervously glance around to check,
they have not been seen naked
in their act of changing their attire
by any stranger.

when the flower-laden branches
of mango and other fruit trees
gently dance in the air,
to sweet notes of the cuckoo’s song
attracting butterflies ‘n insects
to their flowers,
and what a surprise to see 
not so long after
the sudden evolution of flowers
into small unripe green fruits,
which promise to become
sweet ‘n juicy
in the growing heat of 
the engulfing summer.

the morning cool and gentle breeze
rapidly starts to convert itself into, 
a hot, biting, dry, strong westerly wind
as the sun simmers 
agonizingly close ‘n longer,
everyone gets nature’s signal
to search for shade and cool greens
for solace, before the heat saps up
whatever energy is left in the living beings.

27.5.2014

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 6/17/2020 1:15:00 PM
Whom ever thought this "sucked" has never read any of my stuff. I can show you "SUCK". Thanks for sharing this with all of us on the soup. Keep them coming. oldbuck
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Date: 6/17/2020 11:27:00 AM
The imagery has a magnetic influence. It makes me anxious to see summer. The free verse gets a little drab though.
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Date: 12/1/2014 12:05:00 PM
congrats on your win in the poem that sucks contest:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 12/1/2014 9:07:00 AM
Congratulations on your win "this poem S....s" You have to go back five pages on the winners list for this contest. I am going to have to fav this poem.
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Date: 6/17/2014 8:32:00 AM
Congratulations on a well-deserved win, Mohan. This is absolutely beautiful, my friend! Kindest regards!
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Mohan Chutani
Date: 6/18/2014 2:01:00 AM
Thanks Pandita
Date: 6/17/2014 2:43:00 AM
Mohan, sweet win....Love ~SKAT
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Mohan Chutani
Date: 6/18/2014 2:01:00 AM
Thanx
Date: 6/17/2014 2:10:00 AM
nice win..pd
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Mohan Chutani
Date: 6/18/2014 2:01:00 AM
Thanx
Date: 5/27/2014 10:40:00 AM
Beautiful write - great imagery! Well done!
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Mohan Chutani
Date: 5/27/2014 11:36:00 AM
thanx Pandita.
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