Only To Us

In the span of stolen hours, thy lips fall silent apart from thy pupils
muttering softly, acquainting with an
astonishing creation wherefrom 
created. In many respects,
could not restrain
inhaling
its intense
gold of
pleasure.
And unwilling
to exhale for
fear of lost
sight of creators
treasure. Thy lips
drew near, prevailing upon thy pupils;
transcending and transitioning to that wherefrom
created within the inner sanctum, time and time again...surreptitiously.



Pace, G
INK-U-SCRIPT

08-21-2013
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Chiri Avatar
October 31, 2019 at 10:09 PM
Wow this is beyond sexy my friend! Wow! And I'm really loving your work!;)
Chiri Avatar
November 2, 2019 at 1:39 AM
Always!;)
Ink-U-Script Avatar
October 31, 2019 at 10:12 PM
Sending you hugs!!!!! Thank you!!!
Chiri Avatar
October 31, 2019 at 10:11 PM
Ah I see it was a winner too ! Does not surprise me in the least it's a winner for sure in my eyes!:)congrats!;)
Makama Avatar
December 17, 2015 at 4:17 AM
lines with curves of wisdom and landscapes of awe! My mind is in a park of joy to how I manage selecting this page. Keep on writing dear poet and as always, a wonderful 7 without a doubt!
Mister Roboto Avatar
August 19, 2014 at 9:46 PM
Dang PACE! that's sumthin special you twisted up! Amazing easy flowing presentation, InHALE EXHALE , Oh Well, AWW Hell! Love it FAM! Miss you round the way! Come back and back em off with the QUILL! Cuz I got ta tell ya I keep it under FRiLLZ! INK U SCRIPT....I got you on my Favorite WRITERS NOW< don't be 86 the SOupER writes! 7 rate for shore here, Even tho I Foxed with this piece already. Repetition is Bliss!
Nnoli Avatar
July 9, 2014 at 10:32 AM
Nice one, Richard
Sietesantos Avatar
May 27, 2014 at 7:58 AM
Just beautiful - love it - well done!!!
Melugin Avatar
December 9, 2013 at 2:51 AM
Pace, Only To Us is Amazing. Your pen rocks!
Liwayway Avatar
September 8, 2013 at 9:29 AM
Congratulations on this very awesome poem of yours friend Pace. Cheers!! :) :)
Clemons Avatar
September 7, 2013 at 9:45 AM
Congrats on this piece, bruh. Excellent poem, definitely well written. Can't wait to see what else you write. Peace.
Dietrich Avatar
September 5, 2013 at 5:56 PM
very lovely, the lips and the eyes. Congrats on your fine win.
Morgan Avatar
September 4, 2013 at 10:51 PM
Congrats on your win.Morgan
A  Avatar
September 4, 2013 at 6:25 PM
A nice little win Ink ... congrats ~SKAT~ from H-Town... Yeah!!!
Adams Avatar
September 4, 2013 at 4:49 PM
congrats on your win :)
A   Avatar
September 4, 2013 at 7:55 AM
good morning Ink,, ha another great win... always..Linda
Kendrick Avatar
September 3, 2013 at 8:24 AM
Unique in its entirety..Enjoyed reading your winning work..Congrats..Sara
A   Avatar
September 2, 2013 at 9:21 PM
Ink, ... CONGRATULATIONS on your SOFTLY and SENSUAL win...always~ Linda
Morgan Avatar
September 2, 2013 at 7:04 PM
Congrats on your win. Morgan
Mcdaid Avatar
September 1, 2013 at 2:58 PM
NOW THAT IS AN EXCELLENT PIECE OF WRITING I TIP MY HAT TO YOU
A  Avatar
September 1, 2013 at 1:37 PM
Ink ~ a nice winning poem... Love ~ SKAT
Anglesey Avatar
September 1, 2013 at 12:14 PM
Congratulations on the well deserved win... a beautiful and sensual write :)
Andresen Avatar
September 1, 2013 at 6:50 AM
- This became a winning poem, it was really deserved. - Soft and romantic! - CONGRATULATIONS!! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
A   Avatar
August 31, 2013 at 9:39 AM
sweet sweet... gold of pleasure is how it reads... always..Linda
Mcdaid Avatar
August 30, 2013 at 3:06 AM
A TREASURE PIECE BEAUTIFUL A PLEASURE IN READING
Wheeler Avatar
August 27, 2013 at 5:12 PM
Very deep. it takes you there
Thomas Avatar
August 27, 2013 at 8:21 AM
This is brilliant ink!!! Such a beautiful thought & feeling.....love it:) <3 cherie
Babu Avatar
August 27, 2013 at 4:05 AM
WOW.......GREAT.:)
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