Only To Us

In the span of stolen hours, thy lips fall silent apart from thy pupils
muttering softly, acquainting with an
astonishing creation wherefrom 
created. In many respects,
could not restrain
inhaling
its intense
gold of
pleasure.
And unwilling
to exhale for
fear of lost
sight of creators
treasure. Thy lips
drew near, prevailing upon thy pupils;
transcending and transitioning to that wherefrom
created within the inner sanctum, time and time again...surreptitiously.



Pace, G
INK-U-SCRIPT

08-21-2013

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 10/31/2019 10:09:00 PM
Wow this is beyond sexy my friend! Wow! And I'm really loving your work!;)
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 11/2/2019 1:39:00 AM
Always!;)
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Pace Ink-U-Script
Date: 10/31/2019 10:12:00 PM
Sending you hugs!!!!! Thank you!!!
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 10/31/2019 10:11:00 PM
Ah I see it was a winner too ! Does not surprise me in the least it's a winner for sure in my eyes!:)congrats!;)
Date: 12/17/2015 4:17:00 AM
lines with curves of wisdom and landscapes of awe! My mind is in a park of joy to how I manage selecting this page. Keep on writing dear poet and as always, a wonderful 7 without a doubt!
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Date: 8/19/2014 9:46:00 PM
Dang PACE! that's sumthin special you twisted up! Amazing easy flowing presentation, InHALE EXHALE , Oh Well, AWW Hell! Love it FAM! Miss you round the way! Come back and back em off with the QUILL! Cuz I got ta tell ya I keep it under FRiLLZ! INK U SCRIPT....I got you on my Favorite WRITERS NOW< don't be 86 the SOupER writes! 7 rate for shore here, Even tho I Foxed with this piece already. Repetition is Bliss!
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Date: 7/9/2014 10:32:00 AM
Nice one, Richard
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Date: 5/27/2014 7:58:00 AM
Just beautiful - love it - well done!!!
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Date: 12/9/2013 2:51:00 AM
Pace, Only To Us is Amazing. Your pen rocks!
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Date: 9/8/2013 9:29:00 AM
Congratulations on this very awesome poem of yours friend Pace. Cheers!! :) :)
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Date: 9/7/2013 9:45:00 AM
Congrats on this piece, bruh. Excellent poem, definitely well written. Can't wait to see what else you write. Peace.
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Date: 9/5/2013 5:56:00 PM
very lovely, the lips and the eyes. Congrats on your fine win.
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Date: 9/4/2013 10:51:00 PM
Congrats on your win.Morgan
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Date: 9/4/2013 6:25:00 PM
A nice little win Ink ... congrats ~SKAT~ from H-Town... Yeah!!!
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Date: 9/4/2013 4:49:00 PM
congrats on your win :)
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Date: 9/4/2013 7:55:00 AM
good morning Ink,, ha another great win... always..Linda
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Date: 9/3/2013 8:24:00 AM
Unique in its entirety..Enjoyed reading your winning work..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 9/2/2013 9:21:00 PM
Ink, ... CONGRATULATIONS on your SOFTLY and SENSUAL win...always~ Linda
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Date: 9/2/2013 7:04:00 PM
Congrats on your win. Morgan
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Date: 9/1/2013 2:58:00 PM
NOW THAT IS AN EXCELLENT PIECE OF WRITING I TIP MY HAT TO YOU
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Date: 9/1/2013 1:37:00 PM
Ink ~ a nice winning poem... Love ~ SKAT
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Date: 9/1/2013 12:14:00 PM
Congratulations on the well deserved win... a beautiful and sensual write :)
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Date: 9/1/2013 6:50:00 AM
- This became a winning poem, it was really deserved. - Soft and romantic! - CONGRATULATIONS!! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/31/2013 9:39:00 AM
sweet sweet... gold of pleasure is how it reads... always..Linda
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Date: 8/30/2013 3:06:00 AM
A TREASURE PIECE BEAUTIFUL A PLEASURE IN READING
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Date: 8/27/2013 5:12:00 PM
Very deep. it takes you there
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Date: 8/27/2013 8:21:00 AM
This is brilliant ink!!! Such a beautiful thought & feeling.....love it:) <3 cherie
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Date: 8/27/2013 4:05:00 AM
WOW.......GREAT.:)
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