Only Soldiers - For Contest

Only Soldiers


They are thanked for their service
by those who never served.
Commended for their bravery
by those who never donned
the colors of the country
the red, the white, the blue.

They are left alone with demons
that only they can name
seek the silent comfort
of those who know the same,
they limp alone in honor 
of the men they used to be
slowly turn invisible to
the people they keep free.

In silent nod and gesture
they salute in passing pain
bathed in thanks for service,
awash in tearless rain,
not heroes, only soldiers,
in the shadows without name.


11/10/2013

submitted to – Being Invisible – poetry contest
sponsor – SKAT A

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 5/1/2016 8:47:00 PM
I don't see how you deviated from any guidelines, John. It should do quite well Wish I had time to search for another poem of yours to see. As it is, I am way behind in comments and hubbie is expecting dinner on the table. YIKES
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Date: 5/1/2016 8:54:00 AM
John, oh this is breathtaking in its sadness and what makes it worse that it is true, in the USA and Canada it is a travesty that heroes in time are treated so unfairly and do become invisible, wonderful write for the contest, a winner to me, 7+++ ~
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John Lawless
Date: 5/1/2016 2:38:00 PM
Thanks BW, I appreciate your comment and high mark,
Date: 4/30/2016 6:10:00 PM
wow, what a great poem, John. Those poor lonely soldiers! I expect to see this one top of the list.
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John Lawless
Date: 5/1/2016 2:37:00 PM
Andrea, I don't think this will make the contest list of "winners" as I may have deviated from the guidelines.
Date: 4/25/2016 1:03:00 AM
Great job John, sad but true. We have our remembrance day today (anzac day). Dear to Australian hearts.
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John Lawless
Date: 5/1/2016 2:34:00 PM
Sadly, Craig, every country has memories of war's ugliness.
Date: 4/24/2016 11:18:00 PM
True n perfectly beautiful John.. love ur way with words..Gl in contest!
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John Lawless
Date: 5/1/2016 2:34:00 PM
Thanks Dr. Sharma
Date: 4/24/2016 9:14:00 PM
Thank you John, for bringing visibility to these men, and women. J.
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John Lawless
Date: 5/1/2016 2:33:00 PM
Thank you for reading and commenting.
Date: 4/24/2016 7:14:00 PM
Oh John this touched me so deeply - so so sad to see how these amazing people are now treated.. I wrote a poem about veterans living out on the street and being invisible:-( hugs jan 7 and faves
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John Lawless
Date: 5/1/2016 2:33:00 PM
Thanks Jan for the fav and the high mark. Too many of he wounds of war are "invisible"
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