Only On Your Terms

You came to me
with arms open, 
cathedrals of hope
enclosing me in their
warm embrace, 
when you thought it was 
a necessity to 
keep me still.

You came to me,
love-bound, with
strings of hearts
balanced perfectly
on your tongue
when you thought it was 
something I needed to see
in order to 
make me stay.

You came to me,
admission-less, when 
my legs were spread, 
my tongue was ready, 
my head was back, 
and yes formed easy
in the back 
of my throat.

But,
when I was nothing more 
than a fetal position,
crawling on bathroom floors,
screaming
for what was lost, 
when I was stained
with grief,
and I began 
to stumble, yearly,
through gardens 
of tears, 

you were a sun turned cold,
burning me with your
absence of light.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Walker  Avatar
August 17, 2014 at 9:00 PM
Your expression is felt Felicia and done well. Welcome to the Soup... I will forward to reading much more of you... Verlena
Elizab Avatar
August 17, 2014 at 10:36 PM
Verlena, thank you for the warm welcome and kind words!
Yvonne Avatar
August 17, 2014 at 6:41 PM
oops almost forgot to rate.
Yvonne Avatar
August 17, 2014 at 6:39 PM
excellent! so much to take in. so well crafted. thank you.
Elizab Avatar
August 17, 2014 at 10:36 PM
Maurice, thank you so much. I appreciate it and am enjoying your work, as well!
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