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Outside the takeaway, long shadows mix and merge then part in a constant stir of shapes on a hot late afternoon somewhere in a city where half a million will be lonely tonight and a tenth of those not have enough to eat and perhaps a fifth of the hungry will have no home, a million or more will make love and maybe a few thousand will break up, one person could be murdered and a hundred mugged or robbed, whilst in dimly lit cubicles across the town about eighty souls will die of natural causes hardly making a sound. Number 32, your order is ready !, have a good evening - thanks, that didn't take long.

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Date: 4/8/2023 9:53:00 AM
Great take on your number being up and stats - I was going to write enjoyable read but I mean only the twist at the end. The rest is rather grim but like your poem points out, very quickly put to the back of your mind
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Paul Willason
Date: 4/8/2023 4:29:00 PM
The dark side of numbers I guess, nevertheless from memory, the fish and chips were divine. Thanks Dilly for your comments.

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