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Only Black Roses Live Now - Act 1

Word has reached
A distant planet out their
Semaj, this ancient Celt
In ancestral despair

His droid Etto
Has bulletins relayed
The last human on earth
In final death display

Civilisation as he knew it
Has gasped its last breath
For the butterfly winged angels
Has left earth in death

For once again their desire
To gain the orb of life
Has left the world as he knows it
In death dying decaying strife

For weeks he travels 
To a world he once knew
In ancestral pilgrimage
Answers he pursues

He arrives through earths atmosphere
Human eyes will never see
He lands near Loch Torridon
Kingdom of the King Kane family

Whats left of his village
Bodies drained of their life
Children and the elderly
Man and his wife

For the very last time
He views his ancestral surround
For on these peat laden glens
Black Roses abound

Alba, his country
In death dying decay
As he speeds through its glens
Black Roses display

He reaches the lowlands
And its riches of soil
But nothing else grows
Black Roses spoil

Moments later
There is the sound of a sonic boom
Black clouds above separate
Lights appear through the gloom

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/27/2010 3:34:00 PM
Intresting one. Imust say. This tale sounds like a vivid imagination. Nice one . Till later . Thank you also on all your comments. P.D.
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Date: 3/26/2010 7:19:00 PM
the best I have read next to my own works, naturally of course. LOL(joking) Very well thought out piece I like the ending, light gives me hope.
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Date: 3/26/2010 2:20:00 PM
Great rhyme and rhythm in this fantasy write..Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 3/26/2010 1:59:00 PM
Absolutely brilliant. probably the best poem i've ever read on this site.
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