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Only a Circle--- Creep Contest


It is no use pretending
that I'm the perfect blend
You will have to bend the rules of love
to want me for a friend
You must squeeze each piece of the puzzle
to fit your boxed-in dream
But,  don't expect perfection,
I am simply who you've  seen
 
You must stretch yourself outside the box
to keep the dream alive
I am simply just a circle, not the diamond you hope to find

Your optical illusion, is akin to fairy tales
In the scheme of things, within a frame, you will only see me fail
 
You will cut and paste, and try to change until I'm torn in two
Re-arranged, your common sense, can't change your point of view

It is no use pretending
that I'm the perfect blend
You will have to bend the rules of love
to hold me as a friend


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11/21/16
Contest: CREEP
Sponsor: Silent One

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 1/23/2017 1:25:00 PM
Another beauty. Why isn't everyone faving this poem. A Fav for me!
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Date: 12/6/2016 2:15:00 PM
love the write! Congratulations on the win!
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Date: 12/4/2016 1:17:00 PM
I am so happy to see this at the top Carrie. I knew it was going to do great! 7 ; )
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Date: 12/2/2016 3:04:00 PM
What a great take on this contest, Carrie. Many congrats on your top-notch placement. Lainey
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Date: 12/1/2016 2:52:00 PM
Congrats Carrie well-done xxx
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Date: 12/1/2016 8:23:00 AM
Hi Carrie, Congratulations on your 1st place win in the"Creep" contest. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
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Date: 11/30/2016 9:28:00 PM
Congratulations on a beautiful win with an excellent write, Carrie:) I like that first stanza:)
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Date: 11/30/2016 8:58:00 AM
I love this Carrie. So beautifully written. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 11/30/2016 12:45:00 AM
I love this concept Carrie. I'm sure this willl do well in the contest. It's wonderful! 7 ; )
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Date: 11/22/2016 11:30:00 AM
Being different is a good thing. It doesn't always require change. Love the poem Mrs Carrie:)
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Date: 11/22/2016 6:43:00 AM
A different take on 'creep', I've had a friend or two fitting such descriptions. Good luck, I like your version Carrie.
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Date: 11/21/2016 9:26:00 PM
My thought..take me as I am...good luck in the contest
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