One-Track Mind

A passionate woman complains
That men are a bit shy of brains
They have but one goal
Yet can't hit the hole
Unless guided in just like trains . . . .
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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George Avatar
January 25, 2022 at 7:34 PM
Oh.... My.. you are too much ! Why can't he use a pen torch ?
Dietrich Avatar
January 25, 2022 at 7:33 PM
haha, the end line is hysterical
Lawless Avatar
January 25, 2022 at 5:24 PM
HEY, RICO, IT'S AN UNLIT TUNNEL.....
Allison Avatar
January 25, 2022 at 4:59 PM
oh so funny Rico, you sure are a master limerick writer:-) hugs Jan xx
Bauer Avatar
January 25, 2022 at 2:42 PM
ha! reminds me of the old movies when the love scene often cut to a train going into a tunnel. well done, rico!
Lawless Avatar
January 25, 2022 at 5:23 PM
Oh....I still watch some of the old movies and get a laugh every time that train roars into the bedroom.....
Cunningham Avatar
January 25, 2022 at 12:41 PM
It must be the excitement of the moment but they get there in the end as the world is full of people. Tom
Hankins Avatar
January 25, 2022 at 11:51 AM
Oh my! This woman obviously hasn't met a caring man yet. And, I might add, there are many of them out there!
Rose  Avatar
January 25, 2022 at 11:25 AM
that is why I like conductors, with great direct aptitude, lol, love it
M  Avatar
January 25, 2022 at 10:58 AM
Hi Rico very funny but a wee bit rude!! Hehe….Debx
Leffanta Avatar
January 26, 2022 at 10:40 AM
Thank you both for your input! Aloha!
M  Avatar
January 25, 2022 at 9:39 PM
Ok….really rude!!!! Ha
Allison Avatar
January 25, 2022 at 4:59 PM
only a wee bit lol
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