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One's Destiny

One's Destiny I don't come to ask for love. I don't come to ask for pity. If I love you or not - it's my personal feeling. Someone told me, that you are very sad and lonely, that you cursed the life you live - because of a love that you once lost. God has given me the chance to come and see you once again. To see what was left of the one, I once loved so much. Destiny takes care of everything, never forgets anything. A love can make you humble - no matter how strong you may be. Revenge is beautiful - when God allows you to have it. In this world everybody pays and this time - I knew you couldn't win. I will go now and leave you, with the life you chose to live. I that once loved and adored you, will walk away from you. Now you will know the price you have to pay for all the hurt and pain... 03/23/2014 written by Lucilla M. Carrillo

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Brooke Dylan

Date: 4/28/2014 7:10:00 PM

Lucilla I love this poem you have written its like have spoken to my soul... this is what has happened to me.. amazing writing. Brooke

Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 4/29/2014 12:00:00 AM

Thank you Brooke, I am glad that you liked it. I will visit you later.

Cherl Dunn

Date: 4/18/2014 8:48:00 PM

Enjoyed your touching write, it was very expressive, but well done, cheri also HAPPY EASTER to you and yours.

Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 4/29/2014 12:01:00 AM

Thank you so much Cherl.

Donna Jones

Date: 3/29/2014 8:43:00 PM

A touching yet troubling write lucilla...hoping you re OK...being hurt is not fun...the one doing the hurting..well...things even out in the end....hang tough..God bless my friend..

Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 3/30/2014 6:46:00 PM

Thanks Donna for reading my poem. I guess we all get hurt at least once in our lives, but life goes on.

Bl Devnath

Date: 3/29/2014 11:14:00 AM

A beautiful truth you have worded very nicely, my friend....." A love can make you humble - no matter how strong you may be". Who is what and what is who can't modify. Loved always my friend, bl

Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 3/30/2014 6:42:00 PM

Thank you Bi. I am glad that you like it.

Cherl Dunn

Date: 3/24/2014 6:00:00 PM

Great job here love the emotion expressed with so much romantic intent nicely done. i will read this one again, also glad you enjoyed the silence, i've been in a few tornado's myself so this is what i experienced. cheri

Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 3/24/2014 6:24:00 PM

Thanks for reading my poem. I only saw a tornado once. But I have been in a lot of bad storms.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 3/24/2014 3:46:00 PM

No Lucy, you have to stay with your friends and your family that love you, do not go away! Your destiny is for you to linger much longer on this plane of existence! Beautiful writing sentimental and touching!

Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 3/24/2014 5:22:00 PM

Yes - I will stay. Right now I got nowhere to go. Thanks for your nice words.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/24/2014 6:43:00 AM

Divine justice is so sweet ...Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 3/24/2014 5:18:00 PM

Thank you Sara, Divine justie is sweet.

Len Gasun

Date: 3/24/2014 1:02:00 AM

A very beautifully sad poem this is my dear friend Lucilla. Sometimes, though it hurt, we've to accept our destiny. A great write which I so love and enjoyed reading it my dear friend. Thank you so much for sharing! TYSM as well for stopping by and the very lovely comments on my dad's memorial poem. Have a great day! love lots and big hugs, Leonora

Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 3/24/2014 3:23:00 AM

Hi Leonora, Thanks for the visit. Your Dad's poem was great. Some dads deserve the honor. May you have a blessed day.

Robert Pettit

Date: 3/24/2014 12:22:00 AM

Apparently, the guy in question is not the attraction he used to be. This is a sad write, but another good one, Lucilla.

Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 3/24/2014 3:19:00 AM

Thanks Robert. I can see that you read between the lines. You are right.

Russell Sivey

Date: 3/23/2014 9:43:00 PM

I surely loved reading this enjoyable write here this evening! This is a lovely and sentimental poem my friend! What a glorious piece, quite the remarkable poem, Great Work!!

Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 3/24/2014 3:14:00 AM

Thank you Russell, for your very nice comment. dissolution is one of life's surprises.

Tim Smith

Date: 3/23/2014 7:21:00 PM

It is your personal feeling Lucilla...If they have hurt you once they definitely do it again. Move forward and good things will happen....Hugs Tim

Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 3/23/2014 8:34:00 PM

Thank you Tim. I did. Life goes on and so do we...

Charlene Mccutcheon

Date: 3/23/2014 7:15:00 PM

Very poignant! Yes what goes out comes back around. It is sad to watch really. We never have to worry about getting revenge when we have been hurt by someone. God will repay. Thanks for sharing a great write. Charlene

Charlene Mccutcheon

Date: 3/23/2014 7:14:00 PM

Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 3/23/2014 8:32:00 PM

Thank you so much Charlene. Hope to read more of your poetry soon. I do believe that God takes care of things in his own way.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/23/2014 7:01:00 PM

yes, people do choose their destinies in some way or other. Though at times it feels like we are helpless sometimes to our fate. This person does not deserve you, Lucilla.

Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 3/23/2014 8:28:00 PM

Thank you Andrea; That happened a long time ago. Time heals the wounds.

Paul Callus

Date: 3/23/2014 3:29:00 PM

Never easy to deal with a breakup, especially when you are not to blame. Things are done...words are said...people go their way; time to move on and start anew; let the sour experience be an eye-opener. // paul

Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 3/23/2014 6:46:00 PM

You are right. Sometimes people do repent, but it is already too late Many blessings.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/23/2014 3:01:00 PM

ow...the atmosphere this piece creates is pretty forceful and fits your theme... a lovely read, lucy!.. huggs

Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 3/23/2014 6:42:00 PM

Thank you so much for reading. many blessings..Lucilla

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 3/23/2014 1:29:00 PM

deep and very moving Lucilla superb pen hugs

Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 3/23/2014 2:14:00 PM

Thanks Shadow. I'm glad you liked it.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/23/2014 1:12:00 PM

- There are some choices in life that we later see that is wrong - sometimes we get another chance sometimes not - A touching and well written poem dear friend Lucilla. - All the best to you. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 3/23/2014 2:10:00 PM

Thank you Ann Lise. Whatever choices we make, we pay for later.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 3/23/2014 12:45:00 PM

Oh, Lucilla....this is sad. :( It is too real to just be a fictitious write....Well, people make mistakes and live to regret the mistakes they make. Once love is lost due to negligence...It can hardly ever be restored. I was moved by your write. You worded it so well! Love and hugs

Lucilla Carrillo
Date: 3/23/2014 2:07:00 PM

Hi Eileen; Thanks for reading. Yes a true fact of life. Time heals the wounds. We can forgive, but we never forget.