Lucilla Carrillo Poet Free verse

One's Destiny

One's Destiny

I don't come to ask for love. I don't come to ask for pity.
If I love you or not - it's my personal feeling. Someone 
told me, that you are very sad and lonely, that you cursed
the life you live - because of a love that you once lost.

God has given me the chance to come and see you once
again. To see what was left of the one, I once loved so much.
Destiny takes care of everything, never forgets anything. A love
can make you humble - no matter how strong you may be.

Revenge is beautiful - when God allows you to have it.
In this world everybody pays and this time - I knew you
couldn't win.

I will go now and leave you, with the life you chose to live.
I that once loved and adored you, will walk away from you.
Now you will know the price you have to pay for all the hurt
and pain...

03/23/2014
written by Lucilla M. Carrillo

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Brooke Dylan April 28, 2014 at 7:10 PM Lucilla I love this poem you have written its like have spoken to my soul... this is what has happened to me.. amazing writing. Brooke Lucilla Carrillo April 29, 2014 at 12:00 AM Thank you Brooke, I am glad that you liked it. I will visit you later.

Cherl Dunn April 18, 2014 at 8:48 PM Enjoyed your touching write, it was very expressive, but well done, cheri also HAPPY EASTER to you and yours. Lucilla Carrillo April 29, 2014 at 12:01 AM Thank you so much Cherl.

Donna Jones March 29, 2014 at 8:43 PM A touching yet troubling write lucilla...hoping you re OK...being hurt is not fun...the one doing the hurting..well...things even out in the end....hang tough..God bless my friend.. Lucilla Carrillo March 30, 2014 at 6:46 PM Thanks Donna for reading my poem. I guess we all get hurt at least once in our lives, but life goes on.

Bl Devnath March 29, 2014 at 11:14 AM A beautiful truth you have worded very nicely, my friend....." A love can make you humble - no matter how strong you may be". Who is what and what is who can't modify. Loved always my friend, bl Lucilla Carrillo March 30, 2014 at 6:42 PM Thank you Bi. I am glad that you like it.

Cherl Dunn March 24, 2014 at 6:00 PM Great job here love the emotion expressed with so much romantic intent nicely done. i will read this one again, also glad you enjoyed the silence, i've been in a few tornado's myself so this is what i experienced. cheri Lucilla Carrillo March 24, 2014 at 6:24 PM Thanks for reading my poem. I only saw a tornado once. But I have been in a lot of bad storms.

Demetrios Trifiatis March 24, 2014 at 3:46 PM No Lucy, you have to stay with your friends and your family that love you, do not go away! Your destiny is for you to linger much longer on this plane of existence! Beautiful writing sentimental and touching! Lucilla Carrillo March 24, 2014 at 5:22 PM Yes - I will stay. Right now I got nowhere to go. Thanks for your nice words.

Sara Kendrick March 24, 2014 at 6:43 AM Divine justice is so sweet ...Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara Lucilla Carrillo March 24, 2014 at 5:18 PM Thank you Sara, Divine justie is sweet.

Len Gasun March 24, 2014 at 1:02 AM A very beautifully sad poem this is my dear friend Lucilla. Sometimes, though it hurt, we've to accept our destiny. A great write which I so love and enjoyed reading it my dear friend. Thank you so much for sharing! TYSM as well for stopping by and the very lovely comments on my dad's memorial poem. Have a great day! love lots and big hugs, Leonora Lucilla Carrillo March 24, 2014 at 3:23 AM Hi Leonora, Thanks for the visit. Your Dad's poem was great. Some dads deserve the honor. May you have a blessed day.

Robert Pettit March 24, 2014 at 12:22 AM Apparently, the guy in question is not the attraction he used to be. This is a sad write, but another good one, Lucilla. Lucilla Carrillo March 24, 2014 at 3:19 AM Thanks Robert. I can see that you read between the lines. You are right.

Russell Sivey March 23, 2014 at 9:43 PM I surely loved reading this enjoyable write here this evening! This is a lovely and sentimental poem my friend! What a glorious piece, quite the remarkable poem, Great Work!! Lucilla Carrillo March 24, 2014 at 3:14 AM Thank you Russell, for your very nice comment. dissolution is one of life's surprises.

Tim Smith March 23, 2014 at 7:21 PM It is your personal feeling Lucilla...If they have hurt you once they definitely do it again. Move forward and good things will happen....Hugs Tim Lucilla Carrillo March 23, 2014 at 8:34 PM Thank you Tim. I did. Life goes on and so do we...

Charlene Mccutcheon March 23, 2014 at 7:15 PM Very poignant! Yes what goes out comes back around. It is sad to watch really. We never have to worry about getting revenge when we have been hurt by someone. God will repay. Thanks for sharing a great write. Charlene

Charlene Mccutcheon March 23, 2014 at 7:14 PM Very poignant! Yes what goes out comes back around. It is sad to watch really. We never have to worry about getting revenge when we have been hurt by someone. God will repay. Thanks for sharing a great write. Charlene Lucilla Carrillo March 23, 2014 at 8:32 PM Thank you so much Charlene. Hope to read more of your poetry soon. I do believe that God takes care of things in his own way.

Andrea Dietrich March 23, 2014 at 7:01 PM yes, people do choose their destinies in some way or other. Though at times it feels like we are helpless sometimes to our fate. This person does not deserve you, Lucilla. Lucilla Carrillo March 23, 2014 at 8:28 PM Thank you Andrea; That happened a long time ago. Time heals the wounds.

Paul Callus March 23, 2014 at 3:29 PM Never easy to deal with a breakup, especially when you are not to blame. Things are done...words are said...people go their way; time to move on and start anew; let the sour experience be an eye-opener. // paul Lucilla Carrillo March 23, 2014 at 6:46 PM You are right. Sometimes people do repent, but it is already too late Many blessings.

Nette Onclaud March 23, 2014 at 3:01 PM ow...the atmosphere this piece creates is pretty forceful and fits your theme... a lovely read, lucy!.. huggs Lucilla Carrillo March 23, 2014 at 6:42 PM Thank you so much for reading. many blessings..Lucilla

Shadow Hamilton March 23, 2014 at 1:29 PM deep and very moving Lucilla superb pen hugs Lucilla Carrillo March 23, 2014 at 2:14 PM Thanks Shadow. I'm glad you liked it.

Anne-Lise Andresen March 23, 2014 at 1:12 PM - There are some choices in life that we later see that is wrong - sometimes we get another chance sometimes not - A touching and well written poem dear friend Lucilla. - All the best to you. - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Lucilla Carrillo March 23, 2014 at 2:10 PM Thank you Ann Lise. Whatever choices we make, we pay for later.

Eileen Manassian March 23, 2014 at 12:45 PM Oh, Lucilla....this is sad. :( It is too real to just be a fictitious write....Well, people make mistakes and live to regret the mistakes they make. Once love is lost due to negligence...It can hardly ever be restored. I was moved by your write. You worded it so well! Love and hugs Lucilla Carrillo March 23, 2014 at 2:07 PM Hi Eileen; Thanks for reading. Yes a true fact of life. Time heals the wounds. We can forgive, but we never forget.