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Sol conjures the many to lift in light and reach for the peach for the greater good golden the vast sea of black-eyed Susans merging in shine creating a lone soul Susan Ashley September 24, 2020 ~ Third Place ~ Contest: Double Tetractys 3 Sponsor: Eve Roper Picture # 2 *syllables checked on howmanysyllables.com: 1, 2, 3, 4, 10, 10, 4, 3, 2, 1*

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Brian Sambourne

Date: 6/22/2021 9:08:00 AM

Hello Susan, Another winning submission. The poem's movement from singular Sun, to a field of black eyed Susan's, back to a single soul is inspired indeed. The flower itself embodies the glow of sun. Sincerest regards, Brian

Susan Ashley
Date: 6/26/2021 7:21:00 AM

Hello, my dear friend, Brian! Thank you so much for your uplifting presence gracing my poem so richly. I treasure the beauty of your thoughtful comments, which are as deep and meaningful as your wondrous poetry. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 10/8/2020 4:48:00 PM

A lovely tetractys poem to go with the beautiful picture Susan. A well deserved win, congratulations, Belle

Susan Ashley
Date: 10/8/2020 4:55:00 PM

Your heartwarming comments and kind congrats are wonderful to receive, Belle. I'm so pleased to know you enjoyed my poem. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/4/2020 4:24:00 PM

Congrats on your winning work. I enjoyed reading it today. If only we could all reach for the good of all people what a wonderful world this would be. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara

Susan Ashley
Date: 10/4/2020 6:58:00 PM

It inspires me to know that you share in the nuanced feelings of my poem, Sara. Thank you for your gracious visit and your insightful comments.. both are truly appreciated. You're welcome for my visit to your page :) Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Eve Roper

Date: 10/2/2020 5:53:00 PM

Thank you for participating in the Double Tetractys 3 contest, Susan . Congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve"

Susan Ashley
Date: 10/3/2020 11:17:00 AM

Thank you for the honor of my poem's placement in your contest, Eve, it's wonderful to be listed among such talented poets/poetesses. I've never written in this poetry form before, so I appreciated your contest's prompt to push me beyond my comfort zone. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Paul Callus

Date: 10/2/2020 8:41:00 AM

This visual is soul touching, Susan, and you ably projected that feeling in the poem itself. Congratulations on your podium finish. ~ Warm regards & hugs my friend. // paul

Susan Ashley
Date: 10/3/2020 12:00:00 PM

Paul, your presence on my poetry page is always so wonderful. Thank you so much for your insightful comments and your kindhearted congrats. Both are truly appreciated as is your inspiring friendship. warmest wishes and hugs.. ~Susan

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/2/2020 7:58:00 AM

- Beautiful and golden, Susan :) - Congratulations on your third place in the contest :) - Have a wonderful weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Susan Ashley
Date: 10/3/2020 11:58:00 AM

Thank you for your kind congrats and lovely comments, Anne-Lise. Both are truly appreciated. Have a wonderful weekend, as well, my friend. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Jenna Logan

Date: 10/2/2020 7:15:00 AM

I find it interesting that you ended with the lines..."a lone soul," and related it to the lone orb of the sun. Congratulations, Susan.

Susan Ashley
Date: 10/3/2020 11:57:00 AM

Jenna, your lovely comments and congrats are heartwarming. I'm glad I was able to pique your interest with my end lines.. a wonderful compliment coming from a poetess of your caliber. Thank you. warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 10/2/2020 6:03:00 AM

Oh so vividly beautiful Sandra. Very peaceful. Congratulations on the win! Linda

Susan Ashley
Date: 10/3/2020 11:20:00 AM

Thank you, Linda, for your lovely comments and kind congrats. Both are truly appreciated. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Laura Leiser

Date: 10/1/2020 9:01:00 PM

This is a exquisite and brilliant, Susan! A big “wow” from me! Perfect for the contest...a fave!

Susan Ashley
Date: 10/3/2020 11:22:00 AM

I am truly honored, Laura, both by your complimentary words and your heartwarming congrats. It's always a pleasure when your graceful presence appears on my poetry page. The prestige of your fave is truly appreciated, as well, my friend. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Newton Ranaweera

Date: 10/1/2020 8:59:00 PM

Congratulations, Susan, on your win in the contest!! It's such a lovely piece!!

Susan Ashley
Date: 10/3/2020 11:18:00 AM

Thank you for your kind congrats and lovely comments, Newton. Both are truly appreciated. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Angela Crabtree

Date: 9/29/2020 8:25:00 AM

It's cool that there's a flower out there with your name on it. I bet they are pretty when they first bloom. Did you win the contest? I can't find it. You deserve to. This is very beautiful. Love, Angie

Susan Ashley
Date: 9/29/2020 9:49:00 AM

Yes, it is cool, Angie! :) They are very pretty flowers, it looks like a golden daisy with a black center. They just happened to look like what was in the contest prompt. The contest isn't closed so no winners yet.. you can find it under Poetry Contests in the side bar.. The contest name is Double Tetractys 3. You should try writing one and enter the contest. It's fun! I bet you'd enjoy it. Thank you for your gracious and encouraging comments, I'm so pleased you enjoyed my poem. Warmest wishes, my friend.. ~Susan

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/27/2020 10:10:00 AM

Love this! I am seeing many poets drawn to this picture . It was the one that captured me as well. I had no idea what flowers those were, but I like them being black eyed susans.

Susan Ashley
Date: 9/27/2020 10:28:00 AM

It pleases me to no end to know that you enjoyed this one, Andrea. It was one of those poems that just came to me instantly when I saw the pic. Love when that happens, just wishes it would happen more often! :)) I will be checking out yours asap! Thank you for your inspiring comment, my friend. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/26/2020 11:28:00 PM

Surrounded by black eyed Susans, I doubt I would feel lonely. Since no such flowers are around me, then I am lonely. A poem that makes you think...when I can. ~~

Susan Ashley
Date: 9/27/2020 8:37:00 AM

Dear Victor, your poignant response to my poem moves me deeply. Thank you for sharing, I feel your thoughts. Sending you black eyed Susan hugs to wrap around you, dear poet and friend. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 9/26/2020 9:18:00 AM

I feel your poetic inspiration in your write Susan - your soul 'golden is the sea of black eyed Susans.........merging in shine, creating a lone soul' Intense poetry, food for thought - an inspiring poem. Hugs and blessings - Jennifer.

Susan Ashley
Date: 9/26/2020 4:10:00 PM

Jennifer, thank you for gracing my poem with your lovely poetic presence. Your beautiful comments are a joy to receive. Both your visit and your kindness are appreciated, my friend. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan

John Watt

Date: 9/25/2020 9:46:00 PM

Officially welcoming you back, dear Susan. You have been gone too long and dearly missed! I hope life has settled enough for you to enjoy some poetry time for a while. Love your imagery her with the great wizard conjuring a golden sea of black-eyed Susans to lift those beautiful eyes skyward. Also enjoyed the Sol/soul pairing at top and bottom. Wishing a win for you with this gem ~ John

Susan Ashley
Date: 9/26/2020 8:10:00 AM

Thank you, my wonderful friend. Your heartfelt sentiments are received within a grateful heart. I'm inspired to know that you enjoyed my poem and your thoughtful comments lift my spirit to the skies on wings of elation. I have missed being here with my favorite poets and friends, like you, John. You are a gifted poet and a gift as a friend. Hopefully, I will be able to be back on a more regular basis - I would surely love that :)) You are ever appreciated! Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/25/2020 6:12:00 PM

bright as the subject of which you speak, susan... i feel the joy within this poem...huggs

Susan Ashley
Date: 9/26/2020 8:03:00 AM

Your inspiring presence is always a welcomed sight, Nette, for both the mind and the soul. Thank you, dear poetess. Warmest wishes always, my lovely friend.. ~Susan

Susan Woodrow

Date: 9/24/2020 8:53:00 PM

oh my goodness! sunflowers as black-eyed Susans, and so apt! love it! Didn't I say you have the edge first...of course it was in Espaniol, but I'm sure that Eve will agree with me! Bellisima! :))

Susan Ashley
Date: 9/25/2020 11:25:00 AM

Lol! You so get me! Of course, I had to pay homage to the black-eyed Susans, stunning blooms that they are.. :)) Your comments (whether in anglaise, francaise, or espaniol or italiana) never fail to make me smile, mon cher ami. I am especially honored by the special Susan fave as well! Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan

Susan Woodrow
Date: 9/24/2020 8:59:00 PM

PS - a fave...cos I'm A Susan! :))

Jan Allison

Date: 9/24/2020 12:40:00 PM

beautiful interpretation of the image Susan:-) hugs jan xx

Susan Ashley
Date: 9/24/2020 12:41:00 PM

Thank you, Jan. Your wonderful comment is truly appreciated. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan

Heidi Sands

Date: 9/24/2020 12:35:00 PM

So beautiful Susan. I enjoyed this :)

Susan Ashley
Date: 9/24/2020 12:39:00 PM

Thank you, Heidi, for the pleasure of your visit and for your lovely comments. I hope all is well, my friend. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan