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One Wish

One wish Happily he chose his one wish To opt for life of wealth Becoming famously rich Ruler of a kingly place, Missing what matters in life He changed his course In search of true love, But it was too late by then For a pauper now lives in that palace Happy with the choice he made. January 12, 2018 HM: Brian's Choice 1 Contest by Brian Strand

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Valsa George
Date: 1/20/2023 7:51:00 AM
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Those who see money above everything will end up in misery. When his priority becomes love over money, he is rich even when being pauper. Great message, Vijay !
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 5/3/2020 10:07:00 AM
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A terrific piece, Vijay:-) A really fun read. Congrats on your win!
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Vladislav Raven
Date: 1/14/2019 10:12:00 AM
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Hi Vijay, such wonderful content in this excellent write. One wish, choosing money over love, he is the poorest of men. A wonderful message. A poetic gem that shines with such a strong, honest message and imagery. Have a wonderful Monday. Your friend always....Mike.
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 4/3/2018 6:28:00 PM
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The title took me in.... I'm glad ... For me, I'm done wishing.... I'm waiting..
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Maria Williams
Date: 1/14/2018 12:09:00 AM
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Reminds me of a movie I watched a very long time ago. All the money in the world wont buy one love.Brilliant poem as always Vijay...Maria
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/14/2018 6:48:00 AM
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Thank you Maria..appreciate your comments.
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Akkina Downing
Date: 1/13/2018 6:04:00 PM
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Ahh, not easy when man wants money/power over love... Lol! Great write Vijay! Hugs and smiles :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/14/2018 6:49:00 AM
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Thank you Akkina...appreciate the comments.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/13/2018 12:09:00 AM
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Now if you can combine great wealth with love and generosity I think that would be preferable. I enjoyed your poem Vijay.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/13/2018 6:11:00 AM
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Thank you Richard..appreciate your comments.
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James Swartz
Date: 1/12/2018 11:52:00 PM
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A perfect write Vijay. Honest sentiments with truth to the story.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/13/2018 6:10:00 AM
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Thank you my friend.
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Eve Roper
Date: 1/12/2018 8:12:00 PM
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as long as he is happy :) nicely done.. hugs eve
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/13/2018 6:10:00 AM
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Thank you Eve.
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Harry Horsman
Date: 1/12/2018 4:53:00 PM
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think before one jumps, love this Vijay, a sign to happiness.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/12/2018 7:14:00 PM
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Thank you harry.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/12/2018 12:01:00 PM
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- As most people know .... money is not love - Great written, Vijay - Best wishes for a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/12/2018 4:09:00 PM
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Thank you Anne-Lise
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Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 1/12/2018 7:36:00 AM
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A very important message my friend, Vijay, so wonderfully delivered!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/12/2018 4:08:00 PM
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Thank you Demetrios.
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Sneha Rv
Date: 1/12/2018 6:53:00 AM
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Your short poems are always so impactful.. the last two lines are beautiful :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/12/2018 4:08:00 PM
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Thank you Sneha.
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Silent One
Date: 1/12/2018 6:46:00 AM
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Oh so sad... nice one Vijay..
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/12/2018 4:07:00 PM
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Thank you Silent One.
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Joseph May
Date: 1/12/2018 6:25:00 AM
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From rags to riches ...Nicely penned Vijay
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/12/2018 4:07:00 PM
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Thank you Joseph.
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Nette Onclaud
Date: 1/12/2018 6:09:00 AM
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beautiful transformation, vijay... love the last 2 lines..huggs
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 1/12/2018 4:07:00 PM
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Thank you nette.

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