One Wave

seekers are surfing
unable to find the wave —
just beneath their feet

mysteryoceansenryu

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Moon Harp

June 13, 2026 at 4:40 PM

Good senryu, P.M. Congratulations on your POTD win! Moon Harp

Constance La France

June 11, 2026 at 3:51 AM

PM, fun read and congratulations on receiving the POTD honor ~

John Lawless

June 10, 2026 at 4:04 AM

damn, some of us don't even make it to the beach.....masterfully written P.M. that forever search for the ever present.

Beryl Edmonds

June 10, 2026 at 1:24 AM

Congratulations P.M. on having received the award for Poem of the Day… Beryl

Brandy Nicole

June 9, 2026 at 7:54 PM

Sometimes, the obvious is right in front of us. Congratulations P.M. on Poem of the Day. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy

Paul Marc

June 9, 2026 at 2:58 PM

What a pleasant surprise ~ thank you!

Paula Goldsmith

June 9, 2026 at 2:44 PM

Congratulations on your POTD win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "One Wave" write. I love short writes. So much said in a few words... Have a blessed day with your wonderful win...............