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“I'll never be good enough” “This worlds against me” “I want to do better” “But I'm filled with stress and anxiety” When you believe it's your destiny You may call it your fate Understand, it's the voices in your mind That are creating self doubt and self hate No doubt, there are external forces at work That can influence feelings of no hope They create flawed thoughts in your mind Therefore, you struggle to cope So you may ask, how do I stop The thoughts in my mind? Wouldn’t that be akin To remove grapes from wine? You say change my thoughts You say my thoughts aren't me Wouldn't that be like removing my eyes So that I could see? What I’m saying is it’s the flawed beliefs That are troubling you so It's not above removing the words It's about clarifying the words, and then letting them go You begin to let go of self doubt The precursor to self hate Follow this lesson And you'll learn, you determine your fate Believe in yourself You are stronger than the internal words You've created a bad habit It's hard to un-hear what you've heard So create a new narrative Change the thoughts in your mind It won't be easy But neither is living a lie You may ask, the lie? It's the flawed words you believe You've learned to get comfortable With what you call “your stress and anxiety” Change is uncomfortable But that's how we grow Acknowledge the suffering And know, right now, right here, this is what I need to be whole Just remember Take one thought a day And clarify your view There’s a whole new world Awaiting for you

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Date: 11/9/2021 4:10:00 AM
If only. I saw on TV how somewhere(I think California), some researcher or doctor has come up with a treatment to use on the human brain to stop this thoughts and get the brain to work properly. It is what is called depression and misfiring of the brain or wrong routing of the brain. We all have negative thoughts from time to time but some people have them all the time. Sara
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Kelly Hitchcock
Date: 11/9/2021 3:14:00 PM
Thanks Sara, The best treatment for flawed thoughts is CBT. Just as a computer relies on a programmer, so does our brains interpretation of events. We create our own universe. Thanks again, Kelly
Date: 11/8/2021 8:58:00 AM
I found your piece quite compelling, you have some interesting thoughts stored here and have obviously taken time to consider the subject. I enjoyed the read, though I found the line "But aren’t my thoughts are me" confusing, skipped over it rather than miss the rest of the poem. Enjoyed. Nick.
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Kelly Hitchcock
Date: 11/8/2021 1:50:00 PM
You don't remove your eyes to see better...you clear your eyes with drops to see better. You don't remove the thoughts...you clarify. I hope this helps!
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Kelly Hitchcock
Date: 11/8/2021 1:49:00 PM
Nick, Thank you so much for your response. My poems are meant to be thought provoking. Sometimes I get lost in my own thought process. The stanza should have read, You say change my thoughts You say my thoughts aren't me Wouldn't that be like removing my eyes So that I could see? In cognitive behavioral therapy (CBT) and neuro-linguistic programming (NLP) there is a process where we detach from the thoughts and become the observer of thoughts. The thoughts/beliefs we currently hold typically get classified as "me". We attach to the thoughts. When we detach from the thoughts it allows us to identify cognitive distortions. Once we clarify and evaluate our thought, we are in a better position to change the thoughts.

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