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One Sweet Song

I grew up with philosophers and never realized how grandiose those thinkers were before my very eyes Neither had a Ph.D. or similar degrees or authored books that often took supreme intelligence to read They had no claim to fortune or fame but simply, lived life well from day to day and throughout the years though I could never tell The depth of all their thoughts and dreams and how they navigated through mud slides and rising tides all the while, I was elated Not privy to their tribulations and mountain peaks to climb in all their pains and aggravations their spirits always shined Reminding me of Socrates and Plato in some ways always finding peace of mind despite some dismal days Giving until their final ends all the beauty and truth sublime until they bequeathed this world to me I was living as if half blind But now I see their philosophy all these tears and lightyears later my dad and mom sang one sweet song to me and our Creator.

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Michael Tor

Date: 9/3/2022 4:32:00 PM

Love this reflection on great thinkers who were ordinary people Terry another marvelous poem by you. Thank you for shaing my friend.

Bill Baker

Date: 9/3/2022 3:28:00 PM

God bless, mom and dad, and our Creator. Thanks for the touching tribute to your parents, Terry. Most of us realize later in life, how our parent did the best they could for who they were, but you've when a step further in acknowledging their "life wisdom", and how it plesed their Creator. Thanks for sharing through your poetry my friend, Bill

Jenna Logan

Date: 8/21/2022 5:03:00 PM

Hi Terry, there is always an underlying level of humility in your poetry. I'm wondering if you're an only child.

Jenna Logan
Date: 8/21/2022 5:56:00 PM

I hope you didn't think I was being too personal, but your manner of writing indicates to me that you had a lot of parental guidance and attention. That's a good thing, and even better is that you are grateful for the love and guidance you were given. I'm not sure why I thought so, but I did, and thank you for your kind reply.

Terrell Martin
Date: 8/21/2022 5:36:00 PM

Now THAT's an interesting comment and question, Jenna! It makes me wonder what prompted you to say so. But I'll answer your question paradoxically by saying yes and no. By that I mean I'm the "Baby boy" in a family of 5 older siblings so I was, admittedly, somewhat pampered I hate to admit. Ergo, I think your instincts were/are correct. Thx again:)