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One Sunny, Sweet Sunflower Day

One sunny, sweet sunflower day, adventure called. . . I went straightway across those flowered fields of home and facing west, began to roam! When everything behind me lay that sunny, sweet sunflower day, gold rays were filtering through trees, and bluebirds glided on the breeze. Then dropping seeds along my trail of history, I learned too well a sunny, sweet sunflower day can cease. . . when rains change skies to gray. Years passed. . . My homeland beckoned me, and I returned, surprised to see seeds left now bloomed in bright display one sunny, sweet sunflower day!

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Date: 5/4/2015 3:22:00 PM
Congratulations on your win a 7 for this wonderful poem. :~) eve
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Date: 5/4/2015 10:26:00 AM
Congrad's on Your win! Light & Love
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Date: 5/4/2015 9:51:00 AM
Congratulations my poetic friend, you and sunflowers a natural mix
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Date: 5/3/2015 9:34:00 PM
ANDREA, Congrats on your awesome win. Forever ~SKAT~
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Date: 5/3/2015 8:51:00 PM
Lovely poem, Andrea! Yes, our roots always have a hold on us. Congrats on your top win! Sandra
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Date: 5/3/2015 6:11:00 PM
Oh, Of course, the seeds gonna bloom one sunny sweet sunflower day! Nice.
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Date: 5/3/2015 6:10:00 PM
Beautiful, sunflowerry feeling your poem elicits, Andie. Congratulations on your great win! Hugs! Kim :)
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Date: 5/3/2015 5:45:00 PM
Great write Andrea many congrats on your win such wonderful imagery:-) Hugs Jan xx 7 xx
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Date: 5/3/2015 4:33:00 PM
Great rhyme and flow, Andrea, congrats!
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Date: 5/3/2015 4:17:00 PM
A person's homeland is their center, congrats on your win :)
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Date: 5/3/2015 3:44:00 PM
Congrats on your win Andrea
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Date: 5/3/2015 2:13:00 PM
Yea,my homeland beckoned me and I returned......Wonderful piece of work dear friend....Congrats on your win...
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Date: 2/26/2013 4:44:00 PM
Congratulations Andrea :-)
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Date: 2/23/2013 4:29:00 PM
Reminds me of summer time adventures. :-)
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Date: 2/23/2013 8:57:00 AM
wow!!!!!! sooooo like it! You are like a sunflower..brightening our day here on PS. Big congratulations to you my friend Andrea. Always thanks for your support, for all your comments on my poem. Love, Maria (^___^)
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Date: 2/22/2013 7:20:00 PM
Very nice! A field of sunflowers. Just imagine! I have a special fascination for. The seeds you sow, one day do bloom one sunny day! I am in the right company!
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Date: 2/22/2013 1:38:00 PM
nice imagery andrea! congrats on your win :)
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Date: 2/22/2013 1:18:00 PM
wonderful write and win Andrea.....congrats....hugs
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Date: 2/22/2013 9:06:00 AM
Hello my dearest friend Andrea! I'm soo glad to read again another very beautiful poem of yours with its very beautiful form. I hope I can write also poem with this form someday using your poem as examples if you don't mind. Thank you so much and my huge congratulations also both on your fabulous win and this outstanding write of yours! love and big hugs, Leonora
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Date: 2/22/2013 9:01:00 AM
A lovely light-hearted write, Andrea! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 2/22/2013 8:07:00 AM
Another great win, congratulations again. Well deserved. Warm Smiles, Connie
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Date: 2/22/2013 12:53:00 AM
Hi congratulations Andy luv, need I say more lol,this is a lovely write and well deserving of a winning spot...I am hoping for more time next week for more reading and commenting xx
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Date: 2/21/2013 8:38:00 PM
Andrea, your poem is amazing, love your thoughts on the topic "SEEDS" for this contest... goodnight~ LINDA
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Date: 2/21/2013 8:14:00 PM
thank you Andrea, you are awesome Sandyivy
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Date: 11/20/2011 1:54:00 PM
Love to see the sunflower field in the fall. They look like statues in a field with their heads bowed. Nice one. love phyl
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