One Summer Eve

One summer eve and too fatigued to keep from nodding off a moment longer, I succumbed and drifted underneath a sky of twinkling stars, and then when deep in sleep, I knew without a doubt that I could fly! I floated upward in a blissful flight where all the universe was mine to see. Ethereal I dreamed myself to be. I sojourned with the moon and in a light cast blue by seven sister stars near me! How wondrous was the Heaven I saw inked and all the earth so beautiful below as downward, drifting downward, I did go. I wakened. Orion above me winked, and I was all awash in moon’s gold glow! July 6, 2022/ Nature theme in three English Quatrain stanzas for It's All About Three Q's Poetry Contest Sponsor: Constance La France
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Kauffman Avatar
August 5, 2022 at 9:25 AM
Andrea, this is one of your best! The image of Orion winking is just one of many that blend into a flight into moonglow. Discovered many years ago that dreams of flying are some of the advanced forms of dreaming! Happy flying my friend. Congratulations on your win!
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August 5, 2022 at 6:29 AM
Andrea, congratulations on your win in my contest with your lovely Quintain, wonderful writing, blessings ~ Constance
Kerr Avatar
August 4, 2022 at 10:13 PM
Andrea, This is quite the impeccable work. Glorious imagery, flow, rhythm, and narrative Superb in every way Thank you so much for your reflections on my tree poem which was a member poem of the day on Poetry Nook Take care Howard
Goldsmith Avatar
August 1, 2022 at 11:39 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a lovely write. Have a fun/great/blessed day................
Seeker Avatar
July 31, 2022 at 9:13 PM
Soul’s in flight, to our heart’s delight! Congrats on your win, Andrea
Poet Avatar
July 31, 2022 at 7:40 PM
Back with Congratulations, on your contest win, with this stunning poem. Best regards
Kerr Avatar
July 18, 2022 at 9:49 PM
Majestic verses, Andrea. Splendid imagery, visual dream settings and flow. Marvellous Howard
Bayles Avatar
July 16, 2022 at 10:36 PM
What a blissful flight, Andrea, A delight.
Krutsinger Avatar
July 11, 2022 at 10:34 PM
Your flying adventure is fantastic; it uplifted me Andrea.
Buehler Avatar
July 11, 2022 at 10:42 AM
I enjoyed this wonderful dream 'flight of fancy,' Andrea. Beautifully imagined!
Rodrigues Avatar
July 11, 2022 at 7:37 AM
Love the line: cast blue by seven sister stars near me! Be blessed, my poet Sis! xx
Carter Avatar
July 10, 2022 at 11:29 AM
Love the complexity and choices of words throughout
Foster Avatar
July 10, 2022 at 7:15 AM
Lovely imagery... Ann
Clark Avatar
July 9, 2022 at 11:10 AM
Hi, one of the most fun poems to read, I absolutely loved it!
Baker Avatar
July 8, 2022 at 4:36 PM
Excellent imagery and rhyming, Andrea. I enjoy the flight, you could have been a flight attendant. :-) Hugs, Bill p.s. good luck!
Walker Avatar
July 8, 2022 at 2:33 PM
Painted me a wondrous picture with your words of imagery.
Kendrick Avatar
July 8, 2022 at 1:21 PM
Ahh!! Reads like a good contender in Constance's contest. Way to go. It would be nice to have a window in the ceiling and fall asleep looking at the stars. Your visits to my page always encourage. Sara
George Avatar
July 8, 2022 at 9:31 AM
I enjoyed your flight into the costellations of stars and your view of Heaven and finally your waking up 'awashed in moon's gold glow.' Great penning, Andrea !
Leffanta Avatar
July 7, 2022 at 6:41 PM
Keep your eyes on the stars and soar! Aloha!
Hankins Avatar
July 7, 2022 at 9:43 AM
Three stanzas of very fine American quintain. I loved your theme of astral flight, too, Andrea. Best wishes in Constance's contest.
Poet Avatar
July 7, 2022 at 7:02 AM
Your poetry words, Andrea, are filled with exquisite imagery. I had a wonderful time flying on the winds of your creativity, and your beautiful metaphors.
Horsman Avatar
July 7, 2022 at 5:54 AM
Love the journey and the poetry.
Pandit Avatar
July 7, 2022 at 5:32 AM
Enjoyed the ride on the wings of your imagination, Andrea. Splendid images!
Bangalee Avatar
July 6, 2022 at 11:55 PM
beautiful imagery in your poetic words; I enjoyed ~
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