One Stark Trumpet Peals

One Stark Trumpet Peals


At eve, old melodies unwomb,
old ragings wake
as crones, 
stringy hair unbunned,
creep downstairs
to supper on a loin.
As they feed, 
their fingernails
roll back 
and so they gravitate
or, better, crawl 
toward the dawn,
for in the din
that eddies in each ear, 
they can hear 
one stark trumpet peal
as they creep
toward the sun
a final time, 
drawn by 
ancient echoings.


Donal Mahoney
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Culverhouse Avatar
April 17, 2010 at 5:48 PM
different write-keep sharing with us.
Devonshire Avatar
April 17, 2010 at 3:25 PM
You poem made me think of the witches in Macbeth, Donal. Had to play Hecate in a high school play. Your description had MY fingernails rolling back. I was an editor/reporter for many years as well so I do understand how poetry is a nice change of pace. You have very "clean" copy -- no editing needed. LOL I'm enjoying your work. Best Wishes, Carolyn
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