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One Spring

Each morn’s breath was the scent of bluebell sprays,
                          Buttercups lay on the field all ablaze
when on those blankets of grass I’d laze
            watching little lambs that came along to graze.
Bliss was that one spring time’s fleeting phase.

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Janice Canerdy

Date: 2/16/2025 6:17:00 PM

Andrea, your vividly descriptive poem gives the reader a glimpse of a lovely, bucolic scene. CONGRATS! Janice

Terry Miller

Date: 2/16/2025 2:03:00 PM

back with congratulations

Terry Miller

Date: 2/12/2025 2:24:00 AM

This is a fabulous little poem

Paige Hind

Date: 2/6/2025 9:05:00 PM

Gorgeous writing, <3

Michael Tor

Date: 2/1/2025 3:32:00 PM

Wonderful imagery in this one Andrea your words create vivid scenery and appreciation. Hugs.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/1/2025 9:53:00 AM

Ahhh!! Lovely. Thanks for sharing. Sara K

Duke Beaufort

Date: 2/1/2025 8:45:00 AM

Andrea, ahhh!!! Bliss! Although it didn't last forever, we can at least remember it through what you've written and enjoy a brief remembrance through what you've written. Thanks!!

Sam Kauffman

Date: 1/31/2025 10:11:00 PM

Andrea, this poem is rich in rhymes and luscious in serene images. Really lovely. Sending you blessing of spring mornings that we know are just around the corner! Blessings!

Maclawrence Famuyiwa

Date: 1/31/2025 4:16:00 PM

Congrats.

Yann Rolland

Date: 1/31/2025 12:51:00 PM

for me too, it sounds like paradise, enjoyed your beautiful poem and feelings, thanks poet

CayCay Jennings

Date: 1/31/2025 10:11:00 AM

Do I know you, you totally and absolutely creative woman and friend of priceless measure. My plan was to first share my return with you, but we'll have this memory instead and be glad of it. I want very much to hug you. Your poem is a precious, wee gem. CayCay

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 1/31/2025 2:50:00 PM

Wow. You finally got back on. My dear Caycay. Let me go see your latest poetry!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/31/2025 9:45:00 AM

Great poem. Perfect rhyme throughout. Pity you did not take a picture of your beautiful scene.

Ink Empress

Date: 1/31/2025 6:07:00 AM

This is so beautiful and i absolutely love the cadence of your well articulated lines sweet andrea! I was thinking of writing about bluebells too today and i didnt! However youv really delivered a very picturesque and somewhat soothing poem! That made me want to read more! Pleasure reading you always! Sending you light always

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 2/2/2025 10:36:00 AM

Thanks, sweetie

Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh

Date: 1/30/2025 9:52:00 PM

That spring time's fleeting phase-beautiful.

Miranda Hawley

Date: 1/30/2025 8:11:00 PM

Bluebell sprays, and buttercups ablaze. Nice job and I hope spring comes soon.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/30/2025 6:53:00 PM

A lovely pastoral scene!

Sotto Poet

Date: 1/30/2025 2:10:00 PM

Sam, you wrote fantastic poetry! It is nice and sweet! It explores the dual essence of invention, praising human ingenuity and nature's delight.

Quoth Theraven

Date: 1/30/2025 1:42:00 PM

Andrea, Best in show as a flower's fast friend. You know there just might come a day when someone knits these poems together from end to end. May it be the one that remembers the spring. -Richard