One Spring

Each morn’s breath was the scent of bluebell sprays,
                          Buttercups lay on the field all ablaze
when on those blankets of grass I’d laze
            watching little lambs that came along to graze.
Bliss was that one spring time’s fleeting phase.
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Kerr Avatar
September 5, 2026 at 11:21 PM
Hello Andrea, This is a very panoramic and picturesque monorhyme. Sumptuous scene brush strokes.🔥🔥🔥 I enjoyed it. Howard
Canerdy Avatar
February 16, 2025 at 6:17 PM
Andrea, your vividly descriptive poem gives the reader a glimpse of a lovely, bucolic scene. CONGRATS! Janice
Miller Avatar
February 16, 2025 at 2:03 PM
back with congratulations
Miller Avatar
February 12, 2025 at 2:24 AM
This is a fabulous little poem
Hind Avatar
February 6, 2025 at 9:05 PM
Gorgeous writing, <3
Tor Avatar
February 1, 2025 at 3:32 PM
Wonderful imagery in this one Andrea your words create vivid scenery and appreciation. Hugs.
Kendrick Avatar
February 1, 2025 at 9:53 AM
Ahhh!! Lovely. Thanks for sharing. Sara K
Beaufort Avatar
February 1, 2025 at 8:45 AM
Andrea, ahhh!!! Bliss! Although it didn't last forever, we can at least remember it through what you've written and enjoy a brief remembrance through what you've written. Thanks!!
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January 31, 2025 at 10:11 PM
Andrea, this poem is rich in rhymes and luscious in serene images. Really lovely. Sending you blessing of spring mornings that we know are just around the corner! Blessings!
Famuyiwa Avatar
January 31, 2025 at 4:16 PM
Congrats.
Rolland Avatar
January 31, 2025 at 12:51 PM
for me too, it sounds like paradise, enjoyed your beautiful poem and feelings, thanks poet
Godwin Avatar
January 31, 2025 at 10:11 AM
Do I know you, you totally and absolutely creative woman and friend of priceless measure. My plan was to first share my return with you, but we'll have this memory instead and be glad of it. I want very much to hug you. Your poem is a precious, wee gem. CayCay
Dietrich Avatar
January 31, 2025 at 2:50 PM
Wow. You finally got back on. My dear Caycay. Let me go see your latest poetry!
Buhagiar Avatar
January 31, 2025 at 9:45 AM
Great poem. Perfect rhyme throughout. Pity you did not take a picture of your beautiful scene.
Empress Avatar
January 31, 2025 at 6:07 AM
This is so beautiful and i absolutely love the cadence of your well articulated lines sweet andrea! I was thinking of writing about bluebells too today and i didnt! However youv really delivered a very picturesque and somewhat soothing poem! That made me want to read more! Pleasure reading you always! Sending you light always
Dietrich Avatar
February 2, 2025 at 10:36 AM
Thanks, sweetie
Singh Avatar
January 30, 2025 at 9:52 PM
That spring time's fleeting phase-beautiful.
Hawley Avatar
January 30, 2025 at 8:11 PM
Bluebell sprays, and buttercups ablaze. Nice job and I hope spring comes soon.
Rodrigues Avatar
January 30, 2025 at 6:53 PM
A lovely pastoral scene!
Poet Avatar
January 30, 2025 at 2:10 PM
Sam, you wrote fantastic poetry! It is nice and sweet! It explores the dual essence of invention, praising human ingenuity and nature's delight.
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January 30, 2025 at 1:42 PM
Andrea, Best in show as a flower's fast friend. You know there just might come a day when someone knits these poems together from end to end. May it be the one that remembers the spring. -Richard
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January 30, 2025 at 9:48 AM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful "One Spring" write. It will be here before we know it. Have a fun day as you write away..................
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January 30, 2025 at 7:10 AM
Lovely poem Andrea. xx
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