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One Sad Day

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Fifteen years ago when  my father died
To the hospital I carried him that ill fated day
The staff was caring for him so by his side I could not abide
Then very  swiftly to surgery he was  taken away
As I was eating, God spoke to me in spirit and I felt daddy brush as he went away

Contest: God, Ghost, and Love
Sponsor: Dr. Ram Mehta

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Betty Culberson Date: 4/25/2011 3:33:00 PM This brought back memories of my father Betty Culberson Login to Reply

Lynette Chachere Date: 4/19/2011 7:49:00 PM God spoke to you in spirit..sounds very powerful. a sad day that was for you..but hopefully a light to cleanse the soul as well.. ~Always&Forever Lynette Login to Reply

Rhia Madison Thomer Date: 4/19/2011 11:55:00 AM this was a touching piece, i have very much enjoyed it. my love to you with well wished. --Madison Thomer Login to Reply

Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 4/19/2011 5:14:00 AM Congratulations Sara on your well deserved win in Dr. Ram Mehta's contest "God, Ghost, and Love". Love, Carol Login to Reply

Anne Rutherford Date: 4/18/2011 1:47:00 PM Sara Beautiful beyond words. Sorry for your loss.to lose a parent is very hard. Login to Reply

John Freeman Date: 4/16/2011 5:59:00 PM Great to see you in the top ten Sara. Congratulations on your worthy poem's tenth place. Agape, Moses Login to Reply

Cory Long Date: 4/16/2011 4:46:00 PM aww this is sad but very good cory Login to Reply

Jack Horne Date: 4/16/2011 2:17:00 PM Many congrats, Sara : ) Login to Reply

Gautami Phookan Date: 4/16/2011 4:21:00 AM Many Congrats Sara on your win with this touching.Love, Gautami Login to Reply

Dr Hitendra Mehta Date: 4/16/2011 4:01:00 AM Many congrats sara for big win in Dr Ram's contest. Luv & best wishes always - Hitendra Mehta Login to Reply

Tahera Mannan Date: 4/15/2011 8:58:00 PM A very profound write. Warmest congrats for this super win dear. Login to Reply

Elaine George Date: 4/15/2011 6:25:00 PM Dear Sara, The day before my father died, he kissed my hand - something he had never done before; shortly after his passing - one night while I lie awake in bed in tears, I felt his breath on my hand - the same way it had been the day before he died. God Bless you sweetheart. Many congrats on your BIG WIN, Lainie Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 4/15/2011 6:15:00 PM Sara, I remember this one, because it was so personal. Congratulations, and I really love this one. Login to Reply

Anthony Nutter Date: 4/15/2011 6:10:00 PM A little spooky but excellent wrtie, 7 ++++ from me. Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 4/15/2011 4:24:00 PM Congrats Sara on your wonderful win in Dr. Ram's contest with this creative entry my friend... enjoy your top ten win with luv and happy weekend... Login to Reply

Ellen Fahey Date: 4/15/2011 2:09:00 PM Beautiful, Sara. My dad passed on 10 yrs. ago. I was not able to be with him at that moment, but I have experienced many moments, since that night, when I feel his closeness. Funny thing, too...he was always rhyming(usually singing it)! I bet you were such a blessing in your father's life...especially when he needed you most. Congrats on your 10th place win! Ellen Login to Reply

Dr.Ram Mehta Date: 4/15/2011 8:50:00 AM Congratlations on the tenth place win in my contest, Sara Login to Reply

Cherie Durbin Date: 4/14/2011 4:48:00 AM You wrote a wonderful poem from your experience, Sara. Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 4/12/2011 4:35:00 PM What a remarkable experience, Sara, feeling you father's spirit brush and hearing God speak as he passed away. I'm sure it was hard to write about this event, but your poem is breathtaking! Best wishes in Dr. Ram's contest, dear. Love, Carolyn Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 4/12/2011 5:58:00 AM Oh so sad Sara and such a spiritual encounter too..good luck in the contest by Dr. Ram.. this is touching as my Daddy passed on similarly ...he was so young..only 33 .. so words relate to my soul..my friend..good luck luv.. Login to Reply

Doris Culverhouse Date: 4/10/2011 6:29:00 PM enjoyed your thoughts....sad... Login to Reply

Gautami Phookan Date: 4/10/2011 1:50:00 PM It is so difficult to let go a loved one,not just we hold on to their memories but it's like they are always with us,watching us.I lost my younger sister,she was just 15 then.tough...Lots of love and good luck to you,Gautami Login to Reply

Michelle Mac Donald Date: 4/10/2011 6:27:00 AM A soul touching write, Sara. I feel sadness for you; this would have been a difficult time in your life. A poignant verse penned by your love and lingering thoughts. God's blessings to you and yours, Sara. Wishing you all the best! Love, Mikki Login to Reply

Daver Austin Date: 4/10/2011 5:57:00 AM Yes! Mysterious things happen. I have had experience too when my mother died. Thanks for stirring memories. Love, Dave Login to Reply

James Foulk Date: 4/9/2011 10:16:00 PM very sad sara, my grandmother died in my mom's arms in my grandmother's house this poem reminds me of that day, my mom died in a nurshing home 28 years later so i know how you feel and i'm sorry for your lost. this was a very touching piece you wrote. Login to Reply

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