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One Rhyme Family

ONE RHYME FAMILY Sometimes, we are Tom and Jerry or Romeo and Juliet but at one point, we all rhyme. ______________________________________________________________________ 12:07 pm, December 08,2015
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Fraser Avatar
December 16, 2015 at 12:43 PM
Popping back with warm congratulations little one on your poem being recognised ~~ hugs ~~ James xx
Inman Avatar
December 15, 2015 at 10:16 AM
This is special Olive. Wonderful!
Merryman Avatar
December 11, 2015 at 9:35 PM
Creative way to describe family! Congrats on your win, Olive! Love, Kim
Tor Avatar
December 9, 2015 at 1:31 AM
Clever different angle on contest. Congratulations on your win.
Gentry Avatar
December 9, 2015 at 12:40 AM
Clever! Congrats.
Roper Avatar
December 8, 2015 at 11:49 PM
Congratulations on your win, Olive!
Dutta Avatar
December 8, 2015 at 10:20 PM
Congrats Olive. Anisha D
Haight Avatar
December 8, 2015 at 5:53 PM
Lovely take on the theme, Olive. Congrats on your nice win. Hugs, Sandra
A  Avatar
December 8, 2015 at 4:55 PM
OLIVE, :-) Congratulations with your wonderful win! *SKAT*
Dietrich Avatar
December 8, 2015 at 4:01 PM
Interesting way to do it, Olive!! Congrats in the contest.
Onclaud Avatar
December 8, 2015 at 2:14 PM
yes, in the end we all rhyme as a family, eloi.. sweet congrats!..huggs
Lane Avatar
December 8, 2015 at 2:07 PM
cute idea and photos, Olive..congratulations.
Negron Flores Avatar
December 8, 2015 at 1:46 PM
Congratulations Olive Eloisa on the placement of the contest.
Andresen Avatar
December 8, 2015 at 1:46 PM
- Congratulations on your winning poems in "One liners three- family" contest, Olive :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Callus Avatar
December 8, 2015 at 1:17 PM
I like the unique take on this topic, Olive_eloi. I just noticed that this contest has already been judged..my my, how fast!! I am still in the process of posting my entry!! [I spent all day replying to comments] Congratulations on your win:) Hugs // paul
Meade Avatar
December 8, 2015 at 8:58 AM
It is good to rhyme together!!
Fraser Avatar
December 8, 2015 at 6:27 AM
Yes indeed, we all rhyme at one point ~~ lovely little poem Miss Olive ~~ hugs ~~ Mr James ~x~x~x~
Marcum Wong Avatar
December 8, 2015 at 4:37 AM
Olive....I enjoyed this. I wanted to wish you happy holidays! Blessings, Connie
Osho Avatar
December 8, 2015 at 12:08 AM
NICE OLIVE
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
December 15, 2015 at 12:53 AM
Thanks much Francis.. =`)
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December 7, 2015 at 10:23 PM
I couldn't help but let out a huge grin. Superb contrast and a lovely close. : )
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
December 9, 2015 at 2:30 AM
Thank you so much Mark... =`)~O.E.
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