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One Resolution


      O, each year I pen a list of resolutions,
Just some meaningless promises written;
            Words dripping that have no solutions,
O, the sad memories that I keep hidden.

      Just some meaningless promises written,
But this year my resolution will be different;
            O, the sad memories that I keep hidden,
This year I am going to make a commitment.

      But this year my resolution will be different,
My only resolution will be, to let go of grief;
            This year I am going to make a commitment,
Sorrow and weeping have been my life thief.

       My only resolution will be, to let go of grief,
I want to leave the past far behind me;
            Sorrow and weeping have been my life thief,
I will shed my dark cloak of sadness, to be free,

      I want to leave the past far behind me,
And on a crisp white paper I am writing;
            I will shed my dark cloak of sadness, to be free,
And I will start this new year by leaving.

      And on a crisp white paper I am writing,
Leaving all the pain of death far behind;
            And I will start this new year by leaving,
O, all these years my soul has been twined.

      Leaving all the pain of death far behind,
Words dripping that have no solutions;
            O, all theses years my soul has been twined,
O, each year I pen a list of resolutions.

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December 9, 2015

Pantoum

For the contest, Resolutions, sponsor, Shadow Hamilton

Third Place
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February 6, 2016 at 8:20 PM
thank you for the reply
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February 3, 2016 at 11:33 PM
I try to support all contest, thank you for noticing. LINDA
La France Avatar
February 4, 2016 at 8:29 AM
Linda, I did notice and it is appreciated!
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January 31, 2016 at 10:12 PM
Broken, Congrats on your "Resolutions" win. XOX -LINDA-
La France Avatar
February 1, 2016 at 1:33 AM
Linda, thank you for the congrats and the XOX !
Scars Avatar
January 24, 2016 at 7:02 PM
Broken Wings, just popping in to say congrats on your placement in the resolutions contest..Very well written I really enjoyed your poem..Be blessed *smiles*luloo
La France Avatar
January 25, 2016 at 2:48 AM
Laura, thanks so much for the congrats and the compliment and the smiles !
Inman Avatar
December 9, 2015 at 9:24 PM
Great poem BW. Good luck with your resolution. Just don't stop writing. Rather than BW - Broken Wings you can change to BW- Butterfly Wings.
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December 10, 2015 at 6:17 AM
James, thanks for the lovely comment and I like Butterfly Wings, it is something to think about for sure ~
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