Lin Lane Poet Rhyme

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One Ray of Sunlight

As long as there is one star glinting in the sky
I will write lyrics to music playing in my mind.
With but one ray of sunlight to catch my eye
I will pen my emotions in rhyming lines that bind
my heart with yours until my ink well runs dry.



April 29, 2023
Bite Size Contest no.62
Sponsor: Line Gauthier

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Anisha Dutta May 2, 2023 at 10:14 PM If Congrats to win TOP. Blessings. Lin Lane May 2, 2023 at 10:30 PM Thank you very much, Anisha.

Joanna Daniel May 2, 2023 at 6:29 PM Well, didn't I predict? Congratulations, Lin:) Lin Lane May 2, 2023 at 6:57 PM Hi Jo, and yes... you did. Thank you for your support and encouragement... years worth!

Alexis Y. May 2, 2023 at 3:33 PM WoW! You penned such beauty in a few words. Written like the amazing that you are. I found these six lines to be so meaningful. Excellent job. Congratulations on your top win. It was well deserved. Have a fantastic day:-) Alexis Lin Lane May 2, 2023 at 6:56 PM I haven't been around to check contest results, but thank you, Alexis. I'm very pleased this one made the winner's list.

Michelle Faulkner May 1, 2023 at 3:29 PM One ray is all we need sometimes, this is a gem of beauty, best wishes for the contest~ Lin Lane May 1, 2023 at 3:36 PM Thanks ever so much, Michelle.

Jesz Ika May 1, 2023 at 3:29 PM Hopeful. Inspiring. Kindly, let not that ink well run dry, I pray. Lin Lane May 1, 2023 at 3:35 PM Hello, Jesz. Pronounced Jessie? Thank you very much.

Mark Koplin April 30, 2023 at 1:48 PM I hope your ink well never runs dry! Awesome... Lin Lane May 1, 2023 at 3:35 PM Mark, sometimes I run dry, but I know if I pick up my pen, it will write.

Paula Goldsmith April 30, 2023 at 1:23 PM A lovely write/picture. Love the last line. Yes, the same for me. I know my writes come from God. Good Luck. FAV it... Have a fun day/week............ Lin Lane May 1, 2023 at 3:33 PM Many thanks for your many comments, Paula.

Joanna Daniel April 30, 2023 at 12:44 AM Excellent work, Lin, should be a winner:) Lin Lane May 1, 2023 at 3:32 PM Thanks so much, Jo. We'll see. It was something I wrote before I realized it would work for Line.

Tom Cunningham April 29, 2023 at 12:30 PM Sometimes that's all it takes, a tiny spark of light to ignite us Good luck in the contest Lin, hope your weekend is going well. Tom Lin Lane April 29, 2023 at 1:38 PM Thank you, Tom. It's a titch drizzly, but I like it that way.

Mystic Rose Rose April 29, 2023 at 10:38 AM I can see you are an artist both of word and music, what a lovely integrated poem you have penned Lin, lovely Lin Lane April 29, 2023 at 1:37 PM Thank you very much for the kind thoughts, Vie.

John Gondolf April 29, 2023 at 9:28 AM Short and sweet, I love this one. Especially the second line "I will write lyrics to the music playing in my mind." Nicely done Lin. John Lin Lane April 29, 2023 at 1:37 PM Hello John. Thank you for the read and comments. Sometimes shorter can be sweeter... I'll leave it at that.