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One Ray of Sunlight

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As long as there is one star glinting in the sky I will write lyrics to music playing in my mind. With but one ray of sunlight to catch my eye I will pen my emotions in rhyming lines that bind my heart with yours until my ink well runs dry. April 29, 2023 Bite Size Contest no.62 Sponsor: Line Gauthier

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Anisha Dutta

Date: 5/2/2023 10:14:00 PM

If Congrats to win TOP. Blessings.

Lin Lane
Date: 5/2/2023 10:30:00 PM

Thank you very much, Anisha.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 5/2/2023 6:29:00 PM

Well, didn't I predict? Congratulations, Lin:)

Lin Lane
Date: 5/2/2023 6:57:00 PM

Hi Jo, and yes... you did. Thank you for your support and encouragement... years worth!

Alexis Y.

Date: 5/2/2023 3:33:00 PM

WoW! You penned such beauty in a few words. Written like the amazing that you are. I found these six lines to be so meaningful. Excellent job. Congratulations on your top win. It was well deserved. Have a fantastic day:-) Alexis

Lin Lane
Date: 5/2/2023 6:56:00 PM

I haven't been around to check contest results, but thank you, Alexis. I'm very pleased this one made the winner's list.

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 5/1/2023 3:29:00 PM

One ray is all we need sometimes, this is a gem of beauty, best wishes for the contest~

Lin Lane
Date: 5/1/2023 3:36:00 PM

Thanks ever so much, Michelle.

Jesz Ika

Date: 5/1/2023 3:29:00 PM

Hopeful. Inspiring. Kindly, let not that ink well run dry, I pray.

Lin Lane
Date: 5/1/2023 3:35:00 PM

Hello, Jesz. Pronounced Jessie? Thank you very much.

Mark Koplin

Date: 4/30/2023 1:48:00 PM

I hope your ink well never runs dry! Awesome...

Lin Lane
Date: 5/1/2023 3:35:00 PM

Mark, sometimes I run dry, but I know if I pick up my pen, it will write.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 4/30/2023 1:23:00 PM

A lovely write/picture. Love the last line. Yes, the same for me. I know my writes come from God. Good Luck. FAV it... Have a fun day/week............

Lin Lane
Date: 5/1/2023 3:33:00 PM

Many thanks for your many comments, Paula.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 4/30/2023 12:44:00 AM

Excellent work, Lin, should be a winner:)

Lin Lane
Date: 5/1/2023 3:32:00 PM

Thanks so much, Jo. We'll see. It was something I wrote before I realized it would work for Line.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 4/29/2023 12:30:00 PM

Sometimes that's all it takes, a tiny spark of light to ignite us Good luck in the contest Lin, hope your weekend is going well. Tom

Lin Lane
Date: 4/29/2023 1:38:00 PM

Thank you, Tom. It's a titch drizzly, but I like it that way.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 4/29/2023 10:38:00 AM

I can see you are an artist both of word and music, what a lovely integrated poem you have penned Lin, lovely

Lin Lane
Date: 4/29/2023 1:37:00 PM

Thank you very much for the kind thoughts, Vie.

John Gondolf

Date: 4/29/2023 9:28:00 AM

Short and sweet, I love this one. Especially the second line "I will write lyrics to the music playing in my mind." Nicely done Lin. John

Lin Lane
Date: 4/29/2023 1:37:00 PM

Hello John. Thank you for the read and comments. Sometimes shorter can be sweeter... I'll leave it at that.