One Rare Night

One rare night
   fell
      midnight blue
as a multitude of stars, like lofty thoughts,
pulsed with light,
confessions from
the depths of twilight’s essence - sky.

The poetess, ensconced in her small room,
reached down
   deep inside
         her soul of indigo.
Immersed in the profusion of her thoughts,
she felt compelled tonight
to search for only those that shone. . . 

Ignoring a collage of ideas
which summoned disillusionment
or inspired remembrances 
of bitterness and pain,
she moved a pen across a journal page.
Words upon words radiant with hope
began to flow. . .

As eventual as the overtaking of 
the poetess’ rare night by morning’s dawn,
completion of her work had now arrived.
Surprised to be so pleased,
the poetess discovered that all the while
she had been
delineating stars.

3/3/2011
For Mark Toney's the '2022 Poetry Marathon Mile 22' Poetry Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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George Avatar
December 15, 2022 at 6:37 PM
"Words upon words radiant with hope began to flow". . .I feel, this is what happens each time you move your blessed pen. Congratulations Andrea on your honorable win.
Kauffman Avatar
December 15, 2022 at 9:33 AM
Andrea, congratulations on your win. This is a beautiful poem with striking images. I especially like the first stanza. And I love the sense of the personal journey of the poetess. So glad you brought it back for all of us to enjoy.
Pandit Avatar
December 15, 2022 at 9:28 AM
BIG congrats on your win in Mark's contest, Andrea. This beautiful poem goes way back--happy to read this gem.
Toney Avatar
December 14, 2022 at 11:44 AM
Andrea, I love the positivity that's highlighted in your free verse: "... as a multitude of stars, like lofty thoughts, pulsed with light... she felt compelled tonight to search for only those that shone... Words upon words radiant with hope... the poetess discovered that all the while she had been delineating stars." A Fave poem for me. Congratulations on your win on Mile 22 of my 2022 Poetry Marathon Contest. Keep your running shoes on because Mile 23 has already started.
Horsman Avatar
May 14, 2012 at 3:13 PM
Wow, this is so deep, lead by the stars, love this imagery. harry
Foulk Avatar
April 16, 2011 at 4:10 PM
a very beautiful piece you penned. thank you for commenting on Blue River.
Horne Avatar
March 31, 2011 at 8:00 AM
Great poem - and I see it was a winner - lovely words, Andrea
Lacey Avatar
March 9, 2011 at 2:36 PM
don't want to dwell on the negative! :)
George   Avatar
March 9, 2011 at 8:47 AM
Awesomely beautiful, Andrea. Many congra'ts on your BIG WIN. Lainie
Tongco Avatar
March 9, 2011 at 6:58 AM
this is really beautiful. i couldn't shake off the image of the poetess delineating the stars. great poem.congrats with your win --camille
Brown Avatar
March 7, 2011 at 12:09 PM
Congratulations on your winning poem in John Heck's "Hey...Mr. Editor" contest Andrea. Love, Carol
K. Avatar
March 7, 2011 at 4:51 AM
oh wow!! I am so sorry I missed this one before?? But this is just beautiful and I am soo happy you placed 2nd with this magnificent free verse, you have some amazing lines here... --you are definitely getting the recognition that your poetry deserves :D super congrats & hugs to you sweetie :) & yup, you & Joe are definitely in my prayers :)
Freeman Avatar
March 6, 2011 at 6:00 PM
Great to see you in the top three Andrea, beautiful job. Congratulations on your worthy second place honor. Agape, Moses
Devonshire Avatar
March 6, 2011 at 3:12 PM
Andrea, Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
Haick Avatar
March 6, 2011 at 2:51 PM
Congratulations on your 2nd Place Win in John's "Hey Mr. Editor" Contest. Annalise
Guzzi Avatar
March 6, 2011 at 1:30 PM
ahhhhh how wonderfylly open ended! Congrad's on your BIG win and your most excellent forayed into free verse. Light & Love
Richards Avatar
March 6, 2011 at 1:14 PM
When I first read this stellar poem....I was sure that it would do so well !!! Excellent, Andrea...congratulations!!
Sweetheart Avatar
March 6, 2011 at 12:41 PM
Amazing win Andrea.. Congrats .. two for two today luv.. enjoy your top spot wins with luv..
Ruebel Avatar
March 4, 2011 at 8:04 AM
Hell Andrea, This is truly wonderful indeed! I felt like I was taking a journey with you as I read..... This is a beautiful poem Good luck in the contest Lov, Shar
Sweetheart Avatar
March 4, 2011 at 5:12 AM
Lovely and elegant Andrea.. if for Rick's contest ..good luck .. breathlessly beautiful expressions .. enjoyed with luv ..happy weekend ...
Poet Avatar
March 3, 2011 at 9:19 PM
this is a very intense write from you Andrea.Love the smoothness of it.If for contest ,goodluck-kashinath
Babcock Avatar
March 3, 2011 at 4:13 PM
Congrats on your win. Nice to have a friend along side. Will have to look and see. love phyl
Tate Avatar
March 3, 2011 at 2:30 PM
You are a poetess in action. Good show. Thanks for your comments on my poem of What's in a Name.
Marcum Avatar
March 3, 2011 at 11:03 AM
smile -- and the grand finales final stanza; wherein we find the fulfilling of both accomplishment and gratification amid thankfulness for a gift of art created and perhaps even poured to some degree and now, held within anticipations and longings to be shared with many others; the essence of it all ~ "A Fave In 'Beautiful, My Dear Andrea!!!'" ~ love, Always, christopher ~
Brown Avatar
March 3, 2011 at 10:57 AM
I am enjoying reading the many diverse poems written by the many wonderful poets writing and sharing here at PoetrySoup today. I am happy that yours was among the ones I had the pleasure to read Andrea. Wishing you the best in the contest if you have written it for one. Love, Carol
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