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One Out of Six

Who among you is brave enough (or dumb enough) to take the challenge Bet your life to beat the odds ... One out of six Load the chamber with one bullet, spin the cylinder, spin it good Place the wager with a reputable bookie Everybody’s dying to see you lose, so take your pick ... One out of six Click The odds just got narrowed five fold Are you still in, how bad do you wanna win? Up the ante, you tell the gore seekers looking in ... One out of five Click Again you made it out alive, but the odds just got shaved that much more Now the empty chambers are down past four Any stout souls still wanna place another bet, up the vig ... get the payoff set You don’t care much about living or dying right now The only thing you wanna see is the chambers spin, you got a death wish to win ... One out of four Click Everybody’s now getting spooked, they think you got the devil on your side They are so afraid of you: after you slammed the gun down, and said let the money ride Wager board says the odds are now cut in half, there’s so much cash in the pot The whole crowd is wondering, are you insane enough to take another shot Thick suspense is suffocating them ... One out of three Click You’re walking past the graveyard with a wicked smile now Sheer luck that you still got your brains intact somehow Now it’s a fifty fifty hot spin of the chamber wheel There are only two open holes, two more chances to seal the deal So many done cut their losses and got out of the game Russian roulette makes mice out of men, thus it was given a most death-defying name Somebody still wanna see you die, and are willing to walk away flat broke You raise the stakes so high, as you take a final cigarette smoke Light is the gun in your hand, heavy is the tension in the room The spinning cylinder seems to turn forever When it stops, you press the gun to your head ... One out of two Bang! Everybody thinks you’re dead But there’s a fluke chamber backfire, and you’re still alive instead You can’t hear yourself think from the raucous roar of the din Everybody’s looking at you like you’re Lazarus coming back from the dead again Quickly there’s a hush as the house does an inspect reset You gather your courage once more, and greatly up the bet Only one person wants to challenge you, to put their money where their mouth is You down a couple of whiskey shots, and give a nod to a wide-eyed teenage kid As the spinning chambers come to a revolving stop, you see dark visions of your gamble plagued life You see everything you ever did that wasn’t right, as you squeeze the trigger, you look into the bright ceiling light ... One out of two Click There’s one final spin left to take, but nobody got enough money to make you quake Nobody can make you put that gun to your head again, nobody can force you to take that final, fatal spin You breathe a sobering sigh of relief; and collect your earnings, giving an unaccustomed heavenly thank you While everyone leaves out, some muttering: lucky bastard, who knew? You start your new life on borrowed time, vowing that your gambling days are through It would appear the odds are now favoring you

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 5/17/2017 12:41:00 PM
Wow! This one wore me out Freddie, well done...
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Date: 5/16/2017 7:40:00 PM
Whew Freddie, what an intense poem you wrote…it drew me in from the get-go as I was thinking of the scene from the movie "The Deer Hunter"~Che :)
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