One On the Chin

Looking on with disdain
At the wayside street urchin
We feel within us a pricking pain
From conscience to us one on the chin

Judging the other by outer appearance 
Unspoken thoughts veil not our intent
Where has gone innate innocence 
The play divine joyful & content 

09-October-2020

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 10/18/2020 10:33:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Love your line, "Judging the other by outer appearance." Never judge a person (or book) my the cover. Enjoy your win.........
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Date: 10/18/2020 10:36:00 AM
Thanks Paula!
Date: 10/18/2020 5:57:00 AM
Hello, Unseeking Seeker. A well captured lament for a tiny person's undeserved harsh reality. Congratulations on your Win!
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Date: 10/18/2020 7:10:00 AM
Thanks Sigrid!
Date: 10/17/2020 1:19:00 PM
- Congratulations on a great 7th place in the contest, U.S. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/17/2020 8:21:00 PM
Thanks Sunshine! Happy you enjoyed! :)
Date: 10/17/2020 7:27:00 AM
Congratulations on the win! Linda
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Date: 10/17/2020 9:10:00 AM
Thank you Linda! :)
Date: 10/17/2020 5:37:00 AM
May innocence reign dear poet, congratulations on your winning poetry.
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Date: 10/17/2020 6:13:00 AM
Thank you Pixie!
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