One of Two Thieves

One of two thieves
You can only be
One of two thieves
Better choose wisely
One of two thieves

One scorned and mocked Him
Which of two thieves…?
One had to love Him
Which of two thieves…?
One joined the loud crowd
Which of two thieves…?

Which one are you?
You saw His glory?
Which one are you?
Laughed at His story?
Which one are you?
Helped make Him feel worse?
Which one are you?

Malefactors
Only two were they
Malefactors
One condescending
Malefactors
One, oh, so humble
Malefactor,
Choose this day your side

You, criminal!
For sure are you one
You, criminal!
State what you have done
You criminal!
Do you Him deny?
You criminal!
Do you Him defy?
You, Criminal!

Must be guilty
Then say, why’d He die?
Must be guilty
Yet, you mock and sigh
Must be guilty
He died in your stead
Must be guilty
So praise Him instead
Must be guilty
Hands stained, oh, blood-red!

Yes, ‘tis true guilt
Will you then appeal?
Yes, it be guilt
Take for granted still?
Yes, ‘tis your guilt
But the Father’s will
Took away guilt
How will you repay?
Remain in guilt?
For dear life you’ll pray?
Or embrace guilt?

There are two thieves
But one loves so dearly
Of the two thieves
The other loathes— clearly
You are a thief
On borrowed life, merely,
Day-to-day you live…
Wryly, or merrily?
Did He life give,
That you might live freely?
Be grateful, thief…
Saved undeservingly
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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January 28, 2019 at 6:53 AM
My Word Jesz, What an amazing poem - you depict the story of the two thieves and Christ to perfection. Christ told the thieve that confessed his wrong-doing that he would live with Jesus in God's (Jesus's Father) Heavenly Kingdom. Be blessed dear Jesz! Poetry hugs, Jennifer
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February 21, 2025 at 5:54 PM
Greetings Ms Jennifer P. That is a very solemn point you make. Yes you are right, Christ gave him an affirmation in the form of a promise. Hope the new year of 2025 is going okay? God bless you Ms JP.
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