One Nightstand

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From the furniture store I've been banned -
did the saleslady misunderstand?
Claimed malicious intent
but that's not what I meant
when I asked, "Can I get one nightstand?"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 10/23/2020 8:43:00 PM
LOL good one, John ~ I suspect the rate of one night stands is down quite a bit these days
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John Watt
Date: 10/24/2020 1:10:00 AM
Ha ha, I suppose you're right about that!
Date: 9/6/2020 8:02:00 PM
Oh John! This is utterly hilarious! Terrific job thinking of this idea!! Congratulations on its well deserved Win.!
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Date: 9/6/2020 8:18:00 PM
Thank you, thank you, and thank you!
Date: 9/6/2020 7:52:00 PM
WOW! Big Congrats to win First Place
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Date: 9/6/2020 8:17:00 PM
Thank you, my friend!
Date: 9/6/2020 3:09:00 PM
yours was SO original. Just loved it. Big congrats, John.
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John Watt
Date: 9/6/2020 8:16:00 PM
Thank you for that, Andrea. Originality means a lot to me.
Date: 9/6/2020 2:35:00 PM
Double entendre limerick humor at its best! Great "play" on words at third. Congrats!
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John Watt
Date: 9/6/2020 8:15:00 PM
Like the character in the limerick, I used to make the occasional faux pas like this, having grown up pretty sheltered and naive! Thank you for the congrats, Sam.
Date: 9/6/2020 2:26:00 PM
GREAT limerick, John. CONGRATS! Janice
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Date: 9/6/2020 8:14:00 PM
Thank you for your uppercase enthusiasm, Janice!
Date: 9/6/2020 12:29:00 PM
John, deeeelighted to see your very witty lim in lst place! Well-deserved! Many thanks, my friend, for your kind comment re my win. Bob
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John Watt
Date: 9/6/2020 12:56:00 PM
Thank you, Bob, for the shared limerick joy today. Appreciate your generous comment, my friend ~ John
Date: 9/6/2020 12:22:00 PM
HA! John, barrels and thensome, cleverishly done, Congrats indeed for your 1st Place win, Aloha! William
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John Watt
Date: 9/6/2020 12:40:00 PM
Thank you William! Love the word 'cleverishly'! Enjoy your weekend, my friend ~ John
Date: 9/6/2020 7:59:00 AM
this is absolutely hilarious John love the double meaning it certainly made me lol:-) hugs Jan xx
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John Watt
Date: 9/6/2020 11:54:00 AM
Thank you, dear Jan. Coming from the queen of lims, this comment made my day!
Date: 9/6/2020 7:24:00 AM
John, congratulations on your first placement with your hilarious limerick, this made me belly laugh, a fav as well!
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John Watt
Date: 9/6/2020 11:53:00 AM
Tania, thank you for another fun limerick contest to participate in; I'm really having a hoot reading all your winners. Thank you for the very kind (and unexpected) placement as well. Enjoy your day ~ John
Date: 9/3/2020 2:51:00 PM
Brilliant limerick! Expensive it could have been! Well done John! Great humour!
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Date: 9/3/2020 9:54:00 PM
Glad you saw some fun in this, Krish!
Date: 9/2/2020 9:10:00 AM
hahahaha..... I laughed out loud at this one!!!!!!
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John Watt
Date: 9/2/2020 10:18:00 AM
It makes me happy that I could bring a smile, SO. Enjoy your day ~ John
Date: 8/31/2020 10:30:00 AM
Hi John, shows us how people always try to find a sexual connotation in words or phrases and the person saying them is oblivious off what he or she said but it can be misconstrued I had to laugh though because it is a very clever limerick! Deserves a win! I had a fender bender (many years ago) and I went into a panel beaters business to explain that the back side (of my car) I meant was damaged and could they please give me a quote. They couldn't stop laughing! Hugs and blessings Jenn.
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Date: 8/31/2020 11:04:00 AM
Funny story, thanks for sharing Jenny. I grew up quite sheltered from slang and innuendo, and have gotten into a few episodes where the room bursts out laughing because of something I said. This poem was fictional, but representative of how I have unknowingly let slip a double entendre.
Date: 8/30/2020 7:23:00 PM
Oh those double meanings, - when I am at Home Depot, I'm too embarrassed to ask for a screw ;)
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Date: 8/31/2020 11:06:00 AM
Hilarious, Michelle! I had a Jr High School friend who used to hold a screw in his hand and ask girls, "want a screw?" The sad/funny thing was, I didn't get it. So sheltered!
Date: 8/30/2020 6:01:00 PM
Ha, ha! Well done, John! Cute one. G.L. in the contest, Gershon
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Date: 8/31/2020 11:07:00 AM
Thanks, Gershon! There's actually two more in this series, but the contest calls for only one.
Date: 8/30/2020 2:32:00 PM
hahaha. GREAT job, my friend.
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Date: 8/30/2020 3:10:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea!
Date: 8/30/2020 12:35:00 PM
Hope you get first place. Outstanding limerick and image Pangie xx
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Date: 8/30/2020 3:07:00 PM
Thank you, dear Pangie!
Date: 8/30/2020 10:45:00 AM
Great play on words, John! Enjoyed your limerick. Best wishes in the contest. Hugs, Carolyn
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John Watt
Date: 8/30/2020 11:28:00 AM
Thank you Carolyn, glad you enjoyed the silliness. Sometimes I fear the words I meant innocently are taken the wrong way. Hugs ~ John
Date: 8/30/2020 4:02:00 AM
Wow! I had to read this twice to "get it". One night stand. One night stand. One night stand. I am pretty dim I guess. Funny after this FINALLY kicked in.
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John Watt
Date: 8/30/2020 11:25:00 AM
Caren, I find that humor is funnier to me if I've had to work at it a little while. Glad you got my quirky humor!
Date: 8/30/2020 1:13:00 AM
Lol good one John, you really have to watch what you say these days. Good luck Tom
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John Watt
Date: 8/30/2020 11:26:00 AM
I grew up kind of sheltered, and was guilty on occasion of the unwitting double entendre, lol!
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