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One Night In a Haunted Manor

For so many years my one desire was to stay all night in a haunted manor With candelabras to lighten my way, heated by the warmth of a welcome fire Haunted perchance by a lady in white over the years such yearnings to find her Whilst visiting a medieval Maiden’s Tower atop of an ancient manor house I entered a room closed to the public, trying to escape a marauding mouse In the late afternoon as I explored further, through a creaky oak door I emerged A cell like room so sparse and small, apart from a bed there was nothing at all Feeling sleepy I laid upon the bed, as slowly my imaginings began to take over I felt the presence of a fragile young girl, as falling asleep I could hear her weep Locking her away for so many years; her family was told that she was insane But really she was just misunderstood, such a waste of a life never let out again So cruelly imprisoned for so many years, eventually she did lose her mind When finally she died, her spirit remained; unable to leave it was left behind Listening to her story I showed her compassion, and persuaded her spirit to rest For until her spirit was able to leave, her poor sweet soul was left unblessed On waking at dawn I was cold and alone and I wondered was this all a dream but there on the floor the white dress she wore, her soul now at peace it would seem 3rd January 2019 Competition: One Night In A Haunted Manor Sponsor: Tania Kitchin 4th placement in a Premier contest Ultimate January 2019 Brian Strand

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Date: 1/23/2019 7:29:00 PM
Nicely done, Ann, you have created great imagery and feeling on your well written poem. . Congratulations on your win . Hugs Eve ~`*
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 1/24/2019 12:51:00 PM
Many thanks Eve for your lovely comments and hugs! Kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 1/23/2019 7:17:00 PM
Ann, the story behind your write is very creative and I like the way you helped the girl's ghost cross over so her spirit could be at rest. This would make a great move! Congratulations on your win in Tania's contest. Best wishes, Carolyn
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 1/24/2019 12:49:00 PM
Thank you so much Carolyn for your lovely comments and so glad you liked it. Kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 1/23/2019 5:58:00 PM
Ann, I really liked your scary tale and the spooky imagery, congratulations on your winning placement!
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 1/23/2019 6:40:00 PM
Thank you so much Tania for my 4th placement in your great contest. I really enjoyed writing this poem and I am so pleased with my placement. Kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 1/4/2019 1:05:00 PM
HI Ann, this is such a wonderful tale that flows from your pen. I was captivated from beginning to end. I do love such stories. It is sad that some are so true. Would that all would move on to whatever fate awaits them. You have told an excellent tale and I hope it does well for you in the contest. Have a wonderful wekend. Hugs....Mike. XX. Have a wonderful 2019.
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 1/4/2019 1:29:00 PM
Gosh, thank you so much Mike, I am so pleased you enjoyed my poem and thank you for your lovely comments, which I truly appreciate. Wishing you a happy and healthy 2019 with kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 1/4/2019 6:27:00 AM
I do believe in souls that haven't quite crossed over, it was nice that you helped her go to the light, a wonderful story well told Ann, have a great day, thanks for sharing ,
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 1/4/2019 10:45:00 AM
Yes I believe that too Pixie, although my poem was fictional for the competition. Kindest thoughts Ann xx

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