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One More Time

One more time 

Hand in hand we watch
sleepy waves yawning
neath amethyst skies
softly illumined by
 lemonade moonbeams
in rhythmic motions
midst hypnotic sighs
on a sandcastle shoreline
of reflections floating 
silently on the tide
as we fall in love
one more time

Good night Soupers

Copyright © Chris Green | Year Posted 2017

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Cona Adams Date: 2/4/2017 1:25:00 PM I love the message in this one, Chris. I can see it happening on a date with my husband of 62 years. I love romance, and your poems are full of it. I read that long, long poem of long ago, all the way to the end. Anyone reading your poems out loud could surely appreciate the flow and rhythm of your work. The metaphor and rhyme isn't shabby either. Login to Reply Chris Green Date: 2/6/2017 8:47:00 AM Thanks so very much Cona. I am happy you like my poetry. I believe romance is very important in a relationship and obviously in poetry. :) Thanks for your kind words.

Darren White Date: 2/2/2017 11:13:00 PM Aww, that is JUST my dream! I want to do that with the one I love :) Sleep well Chris! Login to Reply Chris Green Date: 2/3/2017 9:18:00 AM Thanks so very much Darren.

Tim Smith Date: 2/2/2017 8:50:00 PM To fall in love over and over...beautiful Login to Reply Chris Green Date: 2/3/2017 9:17:00 AM Thanks so much Tim.

Eve Roper Date: 2/2/2017 8:16:00 PM This so beautiful, Chris, your poems are outstanding Hugs Login to Reply Chris Green Date: 2/3/2017 9:17:00 AM Thank you Eve, I am thrilled you liked it.

White Wolf Date: 2/2/2017 6:58:00 PM Your poems always have that great finishing touch, Chris! Another great write bro! Login to Reply Chris Green Date: 2/3/2017 9:16:00 AM Thanks Rick, I like to try to bring them to a happy ending if I can. :)

John Lawless Date: 2/2/2017 6:56:00 PM OH, you silver tongued devil you..... Login to Reply Chris Green Date: 2/3/2017 9:16:00 AM Thanks so much John. :)

Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 2/2/2017 6:51:00 PM Ahhh, so Romantic a lovely love poem.A Super Great, Write. Login to Reply Chris Green Date: 2/3/2017 9:15:00 AM Thank you so very much Darlene for your kind thoughts.

Andrea Dietrich Date: 2/2/2017 6:39:00 PM ahhh, you are SO good, Chris. Another one to love!! SEven Login to Reply Chris Green Date: 2/3/2017 9:12:00 AM Thanks so very much Andrea. I appreciate your kindness my friend.

Charmaine Chircop Date: 2/2/2017 6:26:00 PM One more time above the sea..Just dreamy and beautiful...Goodnight Chris. Login to Reply Chris Green Date: 2/3/2017 9:12:00 AM Thank you so very much my sweet friend for your dreamy comments. :)