One More Season Past Noon

Early winter crept away
from late autumn's last rains,
but held onto a dull new hurt
that sharpened as I awoke.
The strange caress of winter's sun
warmed me only a while
when I knowingly courted it
and accepted that it would pass.
The winter is brief,
and as solstice comes and goes,
it holds only a hint of malice,
yet I am thankful when it is done.
Mid-winter's cool breeze,
soft, imperceptible,
will give way to late winter's winds,
strident, dusty and dry.
After one more season is survived,
I'll crawl steadily closer
to the truest of truths
that I may never know.

1st August 2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Riabi Dziri Avatar
August 18, 2018 at 11:13 AM
Your poem made me yearn for winter! A beautifully composed write.. Enjoyed reading. Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts into expressive piece of work. Be blessed.
Sharp Avatar
August 19, 2018 at 1:31 AM
Thank you Besma, your words are very encouraging.
Lindley Avatar
August 5, 2018 at 7:44 AM
Love this free verse my friend and I too have always felt that winter holds a hint of malice. For sun, light and fair weather promotes growth , while icy cold does not. I am a summer guy, cold weather I've never liked.. A fav..
Sharp Avatar
August 5, 2018 at 11:53 PM
Glad you liked it Robert, and a million thank you's for fav'ing.
Pandit Avatar
August 3, 2018 at 3:32 PM
Excellent poem Lawrence..enjoyed reading it.
Sharp Avatar
August 4, 2018 at 7:48 AM
Thanks Vijay, I appreciate the visit and the encouragement.
Knowlton Avatar
August 3, 2018 at 2:55 PM
In Vermont, winters seem to never end. But when they do it is with mud and muck and a melt/freeze April. Great poem Lawrence!…Are you in S. Africa?
Sharp Avatar
August 4, 2018 at 7:47 AM
Thanks Charlie, I'm glad you enjoyed it. Yes, South Africa, looking forward to some warm weather very soon.
Lamoureux Avatar
August 3, 2018 at 9:12 AM
I’m a summer guy myself and am amazed how quickly it is slipping by.
Sharp Avatar
August 3, 2018 at 10:16 AM
The South African summer is relatively long, but it slips by far too quickly for my liking.
Jordan Avatar
August 2, 2018 at 4:20 PM
Wonderful piece! Living in a warm climate now, I had forgotten how both bitter and beautiful winter can be. On so many levels. Thanks for sharing!
Sharp Avatar
August 3, 2018 at 12:06 AM
Thanks Gabrielle, very kind words. Enjoy the warms, in a few weeks from now I will too...;-)
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