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One More November

november’s storms keep my travels safe indoors the wind and snow prosper the tumult is a sad caricature of change gusts play tag with ill-prepared complaining cars pedestrians believe that even three legs aren’t enough birds clench the branches patient and unblinking ruffled only in the feather of their migrating dreams the whole world slides the palette of my summer colours bleach to white and the knife cold whispers down my spine windows only offer partial refuge from the nameless anger blasting past edmund fitzgerald felt november’s curse when the beasts of weather ploughed into the lake and the best that we could do was left broken and betrayed we wallow in slow motion sliding to the gaping mouth of next month’s frigid grip november stings all splotched with snow november is the fanged and howling hunter scouting for the wolf-pack winter lurking near november is not quite the corpse but the dying patient much confused with the stealth of marching winds we are swept by short dismantled days and longer nights where did all the winged distractions of our summer go now only all the evergreens are clothed in grace november is the bleeding wound a cracked conceit of angry words and whorls with shivs of icicles and sinking breath the cold is needle-like - injected anaethestic numbing all the toes and fingertips with illusions of sterility while the teasing shrinking sun with troubled light rolls toward december’s promised tipping point

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Date: 11/26/2013 10:12:00 AM
Numbing all the toes... Epic, poem Hans, love the way you ended the poem. Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 11/25/2013 12:52:00 PM
Hans, this month flew right over my head.... , I like your first poetic piece on the site ,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 11/25/2013 12:35:00 PM
- Welcome to P-Soup, Hans ! - Nice to read your first poem here. - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway. - I will come back to read more.... another day :) - oxox / /Anne-Lise :)
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