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One Minute

I
need
a minute

to breathe

when I can lock
the door behind me
and not hear
a single sound
not even
the chatter 
inside my brain

I need that minute
so very desperately
when I can
close my eyes
and whisper
just a sigh

and listen with
ultimate delight
to the bubble
of silence

around
my
head



AP: Honorary Mention 2021, Honorable Mention 2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Wolf Avatar
October 17, 2018 at 11:16 AM
Yup, give me my space! Love this one, Line. :) gw
Gauthier Avatar
October 17, 2018 at 11:21 AM
Absolutely. Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Gershon.
Mcferran Avatar
October 16, 2018 at 10:21 PM
Instant FAV for me! ;) I feel this one deeply... Perfectly penned!
Gauthier Avatar
October 16, 2018 at 10:54 PM
Thank you so much for your most appreciated visit and comment, Rhona.
Mcguire Avatar
October 16, 2018 at 8:21 PM
Been there totaly understand. Great piece of writing.
Gauthier Avatar
October 16, 2018 at 10:54 PM
Thank you so much for your most appreciated visit and comment, Timothy.
Dietrich Avatar
October 16, 2018 at 5:38 PM
good one. I am fortunate to get many of these minutes when alone in my house!
Gauthier Avatar
October 16, 2018 at 6:13 PM
Keeps you sane, Andrea. Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment.
Cholt Avatar
October 16, 2018 at 5:33 PM
Great poem, I know the feeling all so well.
Gauthier Avatar
October 16, 2018 at 6:12 PM
Thank you, WA, for your much appreciated visit and comment.
Kiser Avatar
October 16, 2018 at 3:16 PM
Oh yes, it's always needed; I hope you are able to get that moment; fantastic read.
Gauthier Avatar
October 16, 2018 at 3:18 PM
Thank you so much for your lovely visit and comment, ML. Always appreciated.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
October 16, 2018 at 2:16 PM
Amen.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
October 16, 2018 at 2:45 PM
Si Señora
Gauthier Avatar
October 16, 2018 at 2:24 PM
You mean you know the feeling?
Smith Avatar
October 16, 2018 at 12:39 PM
Don't we all??? I like this one a lot Line...
Gauthier Avatar
October 16, 2018 at 1:01 PM
Thanks for your most appreciated visit and comment, Charlie.
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