One Man's Retirement

In Oxford we watched for three months
the old man, his leg in plaster,
lean against the wall outside the building
where the Simon people cared for him.

He always gave a friendly greeting,
with his Irish accent, putting some life
back into our tired bodies,
as we rushed by on our way to work.

His younger mates preferred
the benches further down the street,
where they drank the bottle of cider,
hidden away from the night before.

Later in the day, senile old ladies
gathered on benches and listened
to the lilting of his Irish brogue.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Ajmal Avatar
June 10, 2017 at 1:12 PM
A very beautiful written poem, but what happens after it, did he died? However I m new on this site and would really appreciate if you could find time to read my poems and give your honest reviews about them
Costales Avatar
June 27, 2016 at 6:47 PM
So what happened after 3 months, sad if he passed away. Regardless, I get the image of someone who in his own way brought the sun to other lives. Me too.:)
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February 18, 2016 at 12:33 PM
MARY, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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March 9, 2016 at 3:36 PM
Thank you Poet Destroyed for reading my poem and your kind words. So much to see as we go about our daily chores.
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December 6, 2015 at 12:39 PM
MARY, Enjoyed reading your poem today. LUV **SKAT**
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March 9, 2016 at 3:37 PM
I never thanked you for reading my poem and letting me know you enjoyed it, Mary
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