One Liner On Love

My kiss made you forget me. One liner about love - Poetry Contest

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Anisha Dutta

Date: 10/10/2016 1:13:00 PM

Congrats Rajat. Your kiss was dangerous.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/9/2016 8:56:00 PM

oh my!! a very creative one, Rajat. Congrats in the contest

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 10/9/2016 6:34:00 PM

Wow! That is a one liner. Good luck in the contest.

Eve Roper

Date: 10/9/2016 2:52:00 PM

Awe,this is good... I see the verse as one kiss sends you to the stars and hard to come back and let go.... It is funny how everyone sees things different . I might be wrong, but which way it goes congratulations on your win : ) Hugs Eve

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/9/2016 12:14:00 PM

- A kiss for goodbye, sounds sad Rajat - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 10/9/2016 9:04:00 AM

How sad when that happens..So much said in just one line.